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Hahaha, this chapter was great! Can't wait for more.

HA! i almost feel bad for them. almost. i sense smexy-ness in the future.. hehe. i love this story! cant wait for the next chapter!

Nooooooo, you bad bad bad tease. Roy and Ed locked in a bathroom and not one smidgeon of smut. Bad author!!!!!!!! . I still love your story though , please update soon . Your loving but frustrated fan. Fleur de lys

YES!!!! *cheers for the locked-in-ness* And finnaly an update!!! Wh00t! *is very very happy* I can not wait to see how they get out of this one! XD I luvs uuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!<3

A new chapter yay! ^3^ thank yoo!!!<3

the file name was great. i love the quick updates and this story is just so freaking awesome!

Nice, very cute how they argue all the time

Hehehe, wow, it's been a while since I saw RoyEd arguing that actually felt hot. The sexual tension is there and it's fierce *_* Keep it up, this is golden.

Alien: whopee! I sooo totally agree with Winry, roy is beyond whipped. *Phone rings and Alien picks it up* Allo? Roy:I AM NOT WHIPPED CANT YOU PEOPLE SEE THAT Alien:uh-huh says the person who cant keep his hands for themselves. Roy:I SO_*mph* Yo, Ed here just ignore him, he doesnt know when to give up. Alien:Sooo true, any ways hows things progressing? Ed:Well, Roys thinking about "bribing" the author person into updating. Alien:With what? Ed:Manly charm though i cant say that he has any and-*dial tone* Alien:Eddie? Eddie you there? *sniffle* that meanie Roy stoped Eddie, I wonder if he's molesting him?...*gets glazed look on face* *snaps out of it* anywhays, update soon please, I am enjoying this alot. You gotta agree with Roy when he said-‘He’s is going to be the death of me.’

mwahahahaha!! I loved the banter between Ed and Roy it was soooo cool!! and thankfully I saw no boo-boo's aren't you happy! I'm glad that I don't have to report them either XD

I loved this chapter can't wait for more

kiki