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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! Love's it! Can't wait for more!
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao, I like the file name Winry came up with :D As usual, wonderful work! :D I honestly can't wait for the next chapter:D This fic rules so much!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very hot and they're both so aggressive. It'll be fun to watch them fight over who tops.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, keep it up!! <3 *.*
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alien: ohh...this was soooo hot...you must update. *grabs ed and huggles him.* Yeah if you dont update soon Ill cry *suddenly notics ed missing* HEY WHERE"S MY EDDIE???!!! *turns to notice Roy sneaking off with him* HEY??!!! THAT"S MINE!! Roy: Nope mine, and we're goona finish what that author person started. Alien:okay... Eddie: yeah and pay her a visit to help her out. Alien:WHAT ABOUT ME??? *Both look at each other weird* whatever maybe you'll see us in the next chapter. *both leave* Alien:*sniffle* PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!! I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY GODS YES!!!!! that was awesome!!! omg, just.. omg. that was great. i love this story! and the car stunt just killed me. i mean ded. i cant wait to see where this goes with the oroboros mafia and al's here! yey! cant wait for the next chapters!
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, very nice! I liked the way you reversed the roles here - by having Ed be proactive and go after Roy, it cranks the heat up that much hotter :)
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_o...whoa...ok so the conversation between the brothers was very 'real' I could totally imangine the same thing between my own brothers or cousins, so yay!! Then at the garage...holy... that was so evil of Ed, I mean like O_O!! haha
'Al had scorned his older brother for how poorly he took care of the house and himself' ...I had to read this twice XS haha scorned = hate more or less... I think you mean to say scolded as in 'he's a bad boy'
glad to know I'm not getting a concussion anytime soon XD
kiki
'Al had scorned his older brother for how poorly he took care of the house and himself' ...I had to read this twice XS haha scorned = hate more or less... I think you mean to say scolded as in 'he's a bad boy'
glad to know I'm not getting a concussion anytime soon XD
kiki
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It had better be T_T
Yay for one hot chapter! *dies and goes to summerland*
Eitherway, updates every few days, maybe every day?! 0.0 *loves you more than before*
you my dear, you are my fanfic hero.......
Yay for one hot chapter! *dies and goes to summerland*
Eitherway, updates every few days, maybe every day?! 0.0 *loves you more than before*
you my dear, you are my fanfic hero.......