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i'm almost done rereading the story before i read the new chapter but just got so excited had to say "THANKS SOOOO MUCH FOR COMING BACK!!!" and I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!

So glad you updated. I just knew it when I looked today. Do we think the tatoo Ed is getting is an ouroborous (spelling?) and not a "roy"? I actually got sad when Ed did in his encounter with Roy at the restaurant. I like how Al was getting to know Rose. And was wondering about the backstory of Noah...and hope Roy does not cheat on Ed. But will Ed decide that he will become king of the streets? The decisions we make when are upset are not always the best ones. Where does Daddy Hohenheim come into the story? I just love your story and it is a definite fun ride. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks.

*sigh* So Ed joins the Ouroboros now? Really really? damn. I was hoping for better for him. At least Lust seems to have his best interests at heart. She can watch his back and hopefully help keep him from doing something that will get him killed. Now that Ed has been drawn into the organization, will Al have to join too?

I'm so frustrated with Roy right now I could scream!! "It didn’t concern you!" Oh really? The one person who loves you with all their heart and whom you love just as fiercely catches you with someone else and it's none of their business?!? RRGH! I could so kick his butt right now! Seriously? Would it have killed him to just say that the girl in question (Noa) was Rose's sister?? I swear it seems Roy just purposely does stuff to ruin his own life! He's such an idiot. Noa was standing right there when Lust left. He could have introduced her to Ed and made things a whole lot easier for himself. stupid idiot jerk. At this rate, Roy and Ed will never get back together. ;_; Hey, if Roy, Noa, Speed, etc were the first Alchemists who later became the Ouroboros, does Roy have a snake tattoo too? He has (or at least had) the rank of colonel in the organization so I thought maybe he would have it as a mark of his association with the mafia. Wouldn't all high ranking members of the group have the mark too? I'm also curious about what Roy will do when he finds out that Ed has joined the Ouroboros. Will he freak out? Will it ruin his relationship with Ed? Will he rejoin the organization? Once Ed is in charge of the streets, will that make him sort of like Roy's boss? Will Roy have to answer to Ed and pay dues(?) to Ed? *sigh* So many questions! Not to mention the upcoming Race Wars! w00t! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

Yea!!!!! an update. and with a cliffie damnit. Wonderful story as usual. So.. how about a round of nut jacks or even better.. nut war! *giggle*

Glad you are back and congrats on the happy news. Any strange cravings?? like oh.. raspberry soup *evil grin*

Awwwwww, a baby! *jumps up and down/squeals* Congradulations! I really hope you get to updating soon, but for now, I forgive you for not updating! I was kind of sad when you hadn't updated in a while, but this is a valid reason! Weeeeeeeeeee! *happy-high*

Yay ^^

Congratulations!! :D Just think! Now you've got midnight feedings, sleepless nights, temper tantrums, and more kinds of worry than you ever knew existed just waiting for you! LOL! Seriously tho, babies are sweet precious little things. One smile from your baby will make all the hell you go thru for them worth it. :) I was just listening to Rihanna's "Shut Up and Drive" so now I'm even more anxious for more of Flame and Fullmetal!! w00t!! Btw, you should find some way to work that song into the story somehow. It'd have to be background music for when something fast paced is going on 'cause it's a kinda fast song. Ooh! Maybe when they're racing or being chased by the cops it could be on the radio or something! just a thought... :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

omg your having a baby and i love the story no pressure and i wish you and your mr.right all the happiness you could ever want ;)

Girl, I just found your story and tried to read it all in one sitting (which is almost impossible to do). You have hooked me. These characters could stand on their own. I cannot wait for you to update. And I hope Roy is not cheating on Ed....a very very bad thing to do. Congratulations on your baby to be. Good luck. Thanks for the story.

I just finnished reading through your story and its Awsome!! I cant wait for you to update. Also congratulations on expecting the baby you must be very excited! so good luck with that and I'll be waiting for the next update.

-Tommy

Congrats! (^^,)

Take your time, it's just good to know you haven't abandoned this one. (~.^)

I wish you, your man, and your baby all the best. (^O^)

XOXO

Pip