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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, the pool table scene had some of the best tension I've seen in RoyEd fic for a while. Keep that up, that was delicious.
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, so close! I love how they're using their dates to get to one another.
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good grief!! that pool scene was...really, REALLY hot!!! loved it, very nice XD
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
much better spelling and story telling for chapter 4 and 5 good job
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god im having fast and the furious flashbacks. *dies thinking of roy as Vin diesel*
im totally in love with this plot man! its just.. awesome! you're doing a really great job and this is just amazing. i love it i love it i love it! and now i cant wait for more chapters!
im totally in love with this plot man! its just.. awesome! you're doing a really great job and this is just amazing. i love it i love it i love it! and now i cant wait for more chapters!
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was so happy to find this when I got home just now! Can't wait for the next update!
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heyo, alien here. You soo have to update. pretty plz.
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January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa!
I really like the concept, tis an interesting, rarely seen one.
I really can't wait to see how this goes.
Thanks for shareing your fic!
I really like the concept, tis an interesting, rarely seen one.
I really can't wait to see how this goes.
Thanks for shareing your fic!
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far, and they all seem to be in character, and that gives you a big plus in my account :]
I'll be waiting to see were you'll take it from here, Ed being the mafia's boss son and all...and I don't mind your spelling at all, It's far better than mine anyway X3...please update soon, I love OU stories, I find them quite refreshing :3 ~.-*zoom out*-.~
I'll be waiting to see were you'll take it from here, Ed being the mafia's boss son and all...and I don't mind your spelling at all, It's far better than mine anyway X3...please update soon, I love OU stories, I find them quite refreshing :3 ~.-*zoom out*-.~
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE!!! I didn't comment the first few chappies 'cause I had to be logged in... Not anymore! Continue please :3