rate_review Reviews

ok so FMA meets 'the fast and the furious'...intersting XD so far the build up is good, and at the moment I can't remember if you said it's a Roy/Ed fic but that'd be really cool if it was XD

watch out for some spelling errors such as 'ells' which should be 'else' and 'finally'--should be 'finale' as in 'grand finale'. there were some more but those were the ones that suck out the most.

kiki