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Alien: O.o i...am rendered.... speechless... UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!

interesting so far. . .sorry don't know what else to say without repeting myself from other reviews XD
I hope you will update it REALLY soon, because not knowing what it's about would kill me...

aahh poor roy, getting hung up on, he sup to be thinking 'yow, what the f*ck just happened??!!' Then there's poor Ed! *pats him on head* all these roy related disasters keep happening. the scene with ed crying in his room was too precious... er i mean sad, yeah sad thats what i meant to say :D Still super loving this story. Make sure you take us to the end, dont leave us hanging man!! Chimo

Oh it's sooo exiting! Poor Ed! *glomps* Thank you for working so hard to update! And thank you for letting me look forward to one more lemon. Honestly the story itself is really good and I'm really enjoying it. I look forward to reading the rest! XD

I loved the front seat scene. And see, told you I was reading while I was chatting with you. Anywho, loved it, and the little detail that angry Ed is loud, sad Ed is quiet, and Al of course would know the difference. Also, I want to see Roy and Ed together, but I hope Roy doesn't mean he's never calling Ed again, just maybe not at the moment.

Poor Ed is being pulled in so many directions! I feel so bad for him! :( Now I really wish that he and Roy had had that romp in the front seat! Damn Scar for ruining a good thing!! grr! That little sexcapade might've helped to offset all the pain Ed's going thru now. poor guy. I hope they both manage to get out of this mess in one piece and find some happiness! :D When you said, "Colonel Roy Mustang, an officer with an illegal gun, practicing their own sense of justice in the underworld.", did you mean that Roy is or was some kind of enforcer for the Ouroboros? Who was that that called Roy after he got off the phone with Envy? What is it that Envy is trying to get Roy to do? If Ed gets pulled into the Ouroboros and Roy is already working for them thru Envy, won't they then be on the same side and not have to keep secrets from one another? Maybe they can help each other escape the Ouroboros! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

-throws candy at your feet- CANDY MOUNTAIN!!!

... Loved this chapter!... Gawd, I remember ignoring calls from boyfriends. XD Poor Eddo! And... Damn you Scar! I hate you all over again. -shakefist- Update soon! -showers more candy-

hn.. what writer's block?!? You fricking ROCK! Another amazing chapter... leaving us in tears and with fears and worried about both our handsome men (Roy and Ed of course). I humbly bow to you. *bows..umm.. humbly*

Wow! I love your fic! It's an interesting twist to have everyone be a mechanic. Thanks for posting it!!!

Please update soon. I love how you're writing this.