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have you considered making jenny walk in on roy &ed like ed walked in on them?

Awesome awesome AWESOME!! Last time u said lime and we got lemon, this time said lemon but we only got lime, i would normally be bummed (cause i'm a bad girl hehe) but that b/j was just so wicked mega super duper hottie hot hot hot it MOSTLY made up for the lack of Ed REALLY getting boned in the front seat lol Also madly in love with the start of this chapter, ed being all emo over roy ignoring him, yeah everyone else too, but we only care about him :) Then the girls teasing him and how he gave in and admitted so easily aaww. Happy feelings this story gives me, now if the 'heavy petting' in the front during that hour turned into a hot little lemon section you'd have NO complaints here lol I'll leave u alone now

Why did you end it here?That's not fair. . .but I guess it's suppose to be that way, you know leaving us (readers)with disappointment, but then with happines when we see our fav author updated! So Update it soon! I wanna be happy! hehehe
I will tell it onece more time: VERY Interesting story, awesome plot, good style and great work!

I am really curious of things that will happen next...

ARGH!! You tease you!! :D You promise me a lemon but you end the chapter just before we get to it! Gah! So close! Don't leave me hangin' like this! LOL! What was your warning about? I didn't see anything that deserved a special warning label. Oh, by the way, and this is completely off subject, it sounds like alien is having all kinds of fun having Roy, Ed, and Envy around her house! I'm a bit jealous that she gets to have Roy and Ed with her so much! :D She can keep Envy tho. I don't envy anyone having Envy around! hmm. That kinda came out weird. I don't 'envy' someone having 'Envy' around. *scratches head* Would that be considered a double negative? whatever. Anyway, great chapter! Loved the part before the race when Roy slid his arms around Ed (effectively marking his territory! w00t!) and chased Jerry off! nice! The race itself was just like the one in Tokyo Drift! totally awesome!! I LOVED it in the movie when DK drifted oh so sweetly up that spiral ramp in the parking deck! He was da bomb!! :D Scar better be careful or he's gonna end up dead. He's playing with fire trying to get in on the action with Envy. Lastly, please please please please continue the nice juicy lime going on in the front seat of Roy's car and hurry up with that lemon!! w00t!! I hate cliffhangers. Good thing Ed didn't get Scar's message or there might not be ANY citrusy goodness going on! whew!! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

mmmmm yummy as usual! Except another damn cliffhanger! Thank the powers that be that I adore you and this story so much that I won't send little chibi Roy and Ed to hound you to post another chapter soon. Ok.. I might *evil grin*

Oh and I completly agree with your "The Dick" theory. They think with it, play with it, love with it and shake it in your general direction when they get out of the shower while making that "woo hoo" call. *smirk*

I'm really enjoying this story. I find myself checking for updates everyday. Thanks for your dilligence in writing it. It's original and has a good plot. It doesn't need more smex but I'm greedy that way so "more smex please". XD But's really good and I will enjoy it even if you don't add more smex.

... I love you -glomp- Gawd, the RoyxEd! Weeeeeeeeeeee! Must update sooon!... Please? Ha ha

I am so sorry that I didn't review your last chapter! I had some dumb school trip. And living without things that are at least a little civil was hard...(=.=' nvm that any way...)

And what I have to say about your story?

You know how to make a story which is even more interesting with every new chapter. Your writing is really great!
I couldn't set my eyes from this even if I wanted to.

I hope you will update soon, because I can't wait to see what would happen next!

^_^

Alien: Phewee...the suspense is killing. I mean the part with Roy and Ed wow... more secrets and I love Wraths wording..I have been seeing you guys make with the moony eyes at each other all night," he continued. “And now you two are making suck-faces. Disgusting! Get a room, at a hotel please!” "First Mina is making moves on me, and then Scar ‘gets lucky’ with a waitress, and now Ed is ‘riding steady’? What’s this world coming to? All I need now is for Al to find a girl. Then I’ll totally give up!"
Beautiful. ^^. oh well, I promised Roy a day out cause of ed.
Envy: WhooT!! I own a drug empire!!! LET THE COKE AND ESTACY FL- *I hit him over his head*
Alien:Ignore him i gave him too much sugar. Love the updates (as usual) and I cant wait for more. >_<

Oh man! I thought I was gonna have a heart attack when Jenny found Ed in the secret room!! As pissed off as that bitch is at him, I'm surprised she didn't shoot first and ask questions later! :D Good thing for him he's got enough sass to fast talk his way out of that one!

I'm a bit confused about Roy's involvement with the Ouroboros. Is he a member of the organization now somehow or are they just using him to get information to find out who's hijacking trucks? I never imagined that Roy would do undercover stuff and spy on fellow racers. Is Jenny the one responsible for the hijackings? Tucker's an idiot not to realize she's using him. I guess as long as the money's green he doesn't care. She's the one putting stuff in Roy's garage to make him look guilty if she gets caught right? If she's hiding stuff in the secret room and Archer's got forged documents that implicate Roy, things do not look good for poor Roy! I don't even wanna think about what Dante or Lust will do to persuade Ed to join them! @_@

Wrath is just the funniest little guy ever! I love this kid! When he walked in on Roy and Ed kissing in the kitchen and said, "Right. Like I don’t know what you guys were just doing. I'm young, not dumb.", I thought I'd laugh my ass off! Hard to believe he's only 7 years old. :) You're killing me with these almost moments between Roy and Ed! Two in one chapter! Ugh! Teasing is so not nice! :P I'm thinking that Ed is falling in love with Roy. He was getting all fluttery when they were sitting on the couch watching TV. kawaii!! If not for Wrath being there, Roy might have gotten a chance to finish what he started in the garage! w00t! :D More Roy/Ed soon please!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=