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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alien: well, just as I got better you had to go and give me a nose bleed huh? Well, envy is laughing at me and ROy is moping cuz he just red that lovely update but his Ed is still pissed at him.
Though it has its perks, he bought me more icescream. Envy stole my tissue so I am having serious fangirl nosebleed control problems. The chapter was soooo cute and what better way to cut tension than with some nice car sex? (I cant say the same for Roy who is looking at my bedroom door longingly.
Ed barricaded himself in there and I think Eddie is just sleeping but some how Roy convinced himself that he's cheating on him with some muscular blond hottie with a bigger penis than his - and you can blame Envy for that one)Gave me a nice image of it when he transformed *cough* right after he stole all my paper napkins. Oh well I gonna call nosebleed control and huggle Kura a bit.
Remember I want what?
Envy: UPDATES-psst specifically more boy love so I can amuse my self by watching he trying to control the blood flow.
Alien:*pushes him from infront com* Whatever just update...PLEASE!!!!WITH A CHOCOLATE COVERED ROY MUSTANG ON TOP!!!!! OH CRAP MORE BLOOD ENVY QUICK,CALL 911 Envy: No way, this is too much fun.
Alien: GAH!!!!! IM DYING FROM NOSEBLEED INDUCED LOSS OF BLOOD THIS IS NOT HOW ITS SUPPOSED TO END!!!!
Though it has its perks, he bought me more icescream. Envy stole my tissue so I am having serious fangirl nosebleed control problems. The chapter was soooo cute and what better way to cut tension than with some nice car sex? (I cant say the same for Roy who is looking at my bedroom door longingly.
Ed barricaded himself in there and I think Eddie is just sleeping but some how Roy convinced himself that he's cheating on him with some muscular blond hottie with a bigger penis than his - and you can blame Envy for that one)Gave me a nice image of it when he transformed *cough* right after he stole all my paper napkins. Oh well I gonna call nosebleed control and huggle Kura a bit.
Remember I want what?
Envy: UPDATES-psst specifically more boy love so I can amuse my self by watching he trying to control the blood flow.
Alien:*pushes him from infront com* Whatever just update...PLEASE!!!!WITH A CHOCOLATE COVERED ROY MUSTANG ON TOP!!!!! OH CRAP MORE BLOOD ENVY QUICK,CALL 911 Envy: No way, this is too much fun.
Alien: GAH!!!!! IM DYING FROM NOSEBLEED INDUCED LOSS OF BLOOD THIS IS NOT HOW ITS SUPPOSED TO END!!!!
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The characters are really convincing and the storyline is good. I want to know what happened between Roy and Speed!
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now, if roy would tell ed that he loves him. finslly, jenny knows that ed means more to roy then she does XD are you going to pare al with anyone?
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now THAT was one hell of a road trip! :) love it! :D I was scared that while they were driving that Roy would say or do something stupid and completely ruin his chances of getting back with Ed. whew! SO glad they've managed to start finding their way back to one another!! :) I just hope it lasts and they're strong enough for all the hell (the Ouroboros, Roy's past, that bastard Speed and that bitch Jenny - grr!) that I'm sure is waiting just around the corner for them.
There are three little boo-boo's that I found that I want to tell you about. #1 - The difference between lime and lemon. Lime means heavy petting, masturbating, and/or going down on someone. Lemon is the full-on act of having hard-core sex - full blown (no pun intended! :D) penetration and cumming usually after doing some or all the lime stuff. This is the second time Roy and Ed have done it and both times you called it a lime when it was really a lemon. Don't think I minded one bit that this was a lemon and not a lime 'cause I love me some Roy/Ed action! w00t! :D #2 - This is just a minor thing but several times you've used the word "pried" when you meant to say "pride". It's not something that spellcheck will catch either since both are legitimate words. just a typo thing. #3 - Roy's blouse. Men do not wear blouses. They wear shirts - dress shirts for when wearing a tuxedo, tee shirts for casual, button-up shirts for a more snazzy look (though depending one the print, style, and color of the shirt, the image one projects changes considerably.), and polo and pull-over type shirts (sweaters) for dressy casual but they don't wear blouses. Blouses are for women. I imagine that Roy was wearing a nicely pressed button-up shirt since that seems about as dressed up as he would ever get. :) Even though he'd be sexy as hell in a dress shirt, cuff links and all, he probably doesn't even own one! :D
OK, enough of me yammering on. :) I'm gonna go watch "The Fast and the Furious: Tokyo Drift" now. Did I ever mention that because of this story I've gotten inspired to actually sit down and watch at least one "The Fast and the Furious" movie? It's true. It's all your fault! LOL!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
There are three little boo-boo's that I found that I want to tell you about. #1 - The difference between lime and lemon. Lime means heavy petting, masturbating, and/or going down on someone. Lemon is the full-on act of having hard-core sex - full blown (no pun intended! :D) penetration and cumming usually after doing some or all the lime stuff. This is the second time Roy and Ed have done it and both times you called it a lime when it was really a lemon. Don't think I minded one bit that this was a lemon and not a lime 'cause I love me some Roy/Ed action! w00t! :D #2 - This is just a minor thing but several times you've used the word "pried" when you meant to say "pride". It's not something that spellcheck will catch either since both are legitimate words. just a typo thing. #3 - Roy's blouse. Men do not wear blouses. They wear shirts - dress shirts for when wearing a tuxedo, tee shirts for casual, button-up shirts for a more snazzy look (though depending one the print, style, and color of the shirt, the image one projects changes considerably.), and polo and pull-over type shirts (sweaters) for dressy casual but they don't wear blouses. Blouses are for women. I imagine that Roy was wearing a nicely pressed button-up shirt since that seems about as dressed up as he would ever get. :) Even though he'd be sexy as hell in a dress shirt, cuff links and all, he probably doesn't even own one! :D
OK, enough of me yammering on. :) I'm gonna go watch "The Fast and the Furious: Tokyo Drift" now. Did I ever mention that because of this story I've gotten inspired to actually sit down and watch at least one "The Fast and the Furious" movie? It's true. It's all your fault! LOL!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, very hot indeed! Though I do hope they eventually work out all of what is upsetting them.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Thank you for the latest chapter! argh.. too hawt! *drool*
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's good that they finally are together! Great chapter and I hope you will update it soon.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!! OK it's not a locked room but hey the backseat of a car is so way more appropriate for our boys! I know.. I should have more to say but.. I just love your story. Keep it up cause I am waiting to see Jenny get hers! *evil grin*
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Roy isn't such a loser after all! Woohoo for them! XD -throws fist in the air- Wonderful chappie. Poor Ed, same thing happened to me today. I can relate, man.
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! *jumps up and does a little dance* They made up, heehee. (^^,) Wait, let me get over it...*giggles gleefully for several minutes*
Great chapter, I can get down to work again, haha. (^^,) And in case you're wondering, deprivation did get me to work--I finished all the work in a day so that nothing would get in my way when the update came, so...(^^,)
'Til next time! (~.^) Ooh, I just want to see Jenny get what's coming to her...that would really make my day...(^^,)
Great chapter, I can get down to work again, haha. (^^,) And in case you're wondering, deprivation did get me to work--I finished all the work in a day so that nothing would get in my way when the update came, so...(^^,)
'Til next time! (~.^) Ooh, I just want to see Jenny get what's coming to her...that would really make my day...(^^,)