rate_review Reviews

Not the quality we're used to???? was that sup to throw me off? Because it did! This is quite posssibly my fav chapter so far. *squeals* Let me tell u just how much i loved this chapter: i was supposed to go out with my friends but i had some work to finish up first and because i was reading this while i was doing my work including stopping to reread parts and squeal in excitment that by the time i finished my friends were ready to go home lol

But i dont mind. YEEEAAAHHH!!!! You've made me so happy. *hugs you* And ur so sneaky! you didnt tell us we were getting a lemon in this one. i was so surprised! Ed rolling down the hill and the 'i missed u' stuff at the end... *sparkles* *floates away happily*

Hooray! I like that they figured this stupid plot out. But that still has to really burn at Ed, that Roy would say he was special and then be with someone because she was "there". He has every right to be upset...

Oh..damn my fricken com got sick, im sick..but i had toi read your updates..I LOVE THEM KEEP UP THE WORK I WANN READ MORE!!!!!!!=^.^= Please? Eddie says please too.

Yay, Gracia! So innocent and devious. Nice that the boys are at least talking to each other.

I hope roy realises he is one damn LUCKY bitch that ed has it majorly bad for him. I mean come on! i didnt see no damn apology, no remorse. Just "you coming?" and "it was a yes or no question" Seriously this yout is one cocky ass bastard. But (or maybe because :) i do love him so. Still feel sorry for Speed despite it all, really curious to know what went down so wrong with roy that they have all that beef. Clearly that was not a good break up. Have someone tell that story one day pwease :D Yeah! So in love with this story. Waiting EAGERLY for next chapter.

*blushes* I'm so pleased that you like my reviews! I can get a bit wordy sometimes and always fret that I'm saying too much when writing a review that is longer than what most people write. I just don't like short reviews. How are you supposed to get your point across and offer encouragement if all you write is, "Love this. Please write more."? I always have opinions and I love to share them with anyone who'll listen! :)

Now, on to the review!! Oh! I was SO glad that Ed left with Roy!! YAY!! *happy dances* Surrender to that dark temptation, Ed! It'll be good for ya! ;) I could just hug Gracia for "accidentally" spilling that drink on Jenny! LOL! While I'd have loved to have had Jenny get scalded with hot soup or have her hair set on fire by a waiter walking too close to her with some flaming dish, ruining her dress, and subsequently her date with Roy, works just fine for me! bitchy ho. What was wrong with Ed when he considered going back into the restaurant for Speed?? I know he needed a ride but damn! Had he lost his ever lovin' mind?!? He knew he'd been played and yet he still thought about going back into that shit?!? Lord love him but he wasn't thinkin' straight. And what is up with Speed having the nerve to act all rejected and disappointed?? Hello dumbass, you're the one who's been connin' Ed and you got the cojones to act all hurt and some junk?!?! What a freakin' idiot! whatever. Where's Winry with that wrench of hers when I need her? :) Wrath is so cute with the explanation of, "He can't sleep", to explain Ed being in love! Little man's got it all figured out! :D Oh, it should be that Wrath and Scar were watching the monster truck rally on cable on cabal. A cabal is a small group of conspirators who plot and plan evil deeds not something you watch TV with. just a little FYI. :) Anyway, can't wait to see how Roy explains away all the hurt he's caused Ed. If he'd quit being such a smartass all the time, he might actually get somewhere with Ed. :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

Hey,
Well aint this a little jem. I had to say when I first read it I was a little taken back. I wasn't really expecting much, I didn't think I'd become a rabid fangirl. Pushing to read more and more ^^. It's really great, I haven't watched FMA in ages and after the first chapter I just upped and put it on. I watched them all, all over again. This is brilliant you're a very good writer. There's lots of detail and description without being over bearing. I also must congradulate you on your plot. At first when I saw how may chapter I wondered what on earth could you be rambling on about. But this is pure genius, the perfect balance of romance, action, detail, oc'ness and utterly and totally perfect. Every character is just brilliant, they fit there roles and don't seem too oc. Everything fit's brilliantly. *huggles* I think you've made me your unyielding fan for life. I beg of you to update when you can. It's so amazingly brilliant.
I have to say the pool scene was one of my favourites it was funny, touching and oh so delicious but I love them all. Anyway I must stop babbling but please keep up the terrific work and write more shortly.
Luv and Licks
xxxx

i would love speed with my whole heart if he hadn't helped jenny. couldn't you just give speed someone else to love though? and is roy going to fire jenny now, ant tell her that she is nothing more than a late night booty call for when he can't get ed out of his mind?

I loved this chapter! Speed and Jenny got a beat down, heh, gooo Gracia! And Hughes! Great chapter, I can't wait what happens next. Update soon!

I kinda feel bad for Speed...but then again, he *did* conspire with the evil we know as Jenny, so...

I like this chapter, even if Roy is still an idiot. He's my favorite character, but I'm so mad at him. He's so lucky Ed has it bad--if it were me, I'd have kicked him in the face, tossed him out of the car, and probably run him over...hmmm...right...(o_0) I'm strange when I'm displeased. (^^,)

UPDATE, HONEY!!! (^O^) Mo, I've got five papers due in two days and I have accomplished nothing, but I need m~ore...(^^;;)