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by Deb

person ToRtUrE
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn it would have been more fun if Duo was with twins. Tsch, I just love to see that man suffer.

Any way I finally got off my lazy ass to review. I've been reading this for more then awhile. Good work well done, hope to see more in the future.
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sitting on the edge of my seat, biting my nails. I hope that they finally get the break that they are looking for when they find the 'message' Duo left for them. I'd hate to have to see Duo kill anymore people at the whim of the bad guys just so that they can make a statement. Keep up the great work. I can hardly wait.
person Arlit
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I truly hope that this story will be continued.
I am on the edge of my seat and am left anxious and wondering as to what will happen next.
Recently I have finished reading Chimaera and I loved the story. Full of action and suspense,
yet and still a soft and sweet love story to the core.
Please keep writing if you haven't already begun to!


Arlit ~
person Dragon7
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story please continue writing and post again soon.

schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's all getting so exciting, racing down to the last seconds. And yea for Nurse Brown for standing up to the bully for the baby's rights. I was so proud of her. I can't wait to see what Duo does. Something unexpected, I'm sure, I can't see him killing an innocent person. And I hope Heero and company don't race in one minute after all of the action is over. Can't wait to see what happens next. All the best, keep up the great work.
person Dragon7
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter.
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope Duric has nightmares when he tries to sleep. I hope Duo inflicts extra pain on him for what he did to Nurse Brown. I am so on edge, wanting to know what happens next. Is Heero going to come chargning in at the last minute like a knight on a white horse, or is Duo going to be able to escape before then? And just what is it they want badly enough so as to take the chance of irritating Shinigami? It's all so exciting. Keep up the great work, can't wait until the next update.
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's getting very exciting. I'd sure hate to have Duo pissed off at me. The bad guys don't stand a chance. Keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter as always! ^___^ *grr* they better not hurt a hair on that babys head, or the nurise's for that mater. *growl* At this point I not sure who I am more mad at that paliteions, or that L2 gang. *glare* Please update as soon as you can. I have to know that the baby and nirce is okeay....Just please update! *beggeing and pleading*
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*chuckle* Look like someone wasn't paying enough attion to the News, ne? LOL I wander if they will a have anther serprise packge in 9 mounts, *giggle....stops abrutely, eyes whidning* Shit, what about those guys from L2, and those crupted Palations...shit this is not good. *grown* Things about to get complacted and quick. *sigh* May God or Gods watch over them, and keep them safe, and give them alots of Luck. They sure the hell going to need it. *sweat drop* Great work on the chap! ^___^ I hope you update as soon as you can! XD

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