Aside from the usual i loved every part of your story, I also really appreciate the note you put in response to the Anon review. As someone who is into more extremes in the bedroom, I thought the way you wrote it was brilliant. The fact that Vegeta realized that there was more power in the ability to do those things with Kakarott who trusted him entirely, and who he trusted, was beautiful. Like any kink, but especially BDSM, trust is absolutely integral. There is immense pleasure in allowing someone to do that to you while knowing they won't hurt you any further than what is clearly defined and obviously wanted. People like Anon merely throw accusations at things they can't understand, because of the simple fact that they don't understand. Nor do they often try to.
In my humble opinion, there's a beauty to BDSM when it's done correctly, and you wrote it perfectly.
and what about me? oh yeah, I'm a perv too ^^
sexy and hot, as always. you go!
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You are one of the few writers that can write these kind of relationships realistically, making the reader understand the trust, respect and love involved, instead of making it all about power, dominance and submission. Thank you.
PS. Which Pokemon are you going to do? Is it a crossover with DBZ? I'll have to look out for it if you are serious.
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I especially liked Piccolos double barrels, wonder what he squirted being a plant, and including Bulma was unexpected but very welcome. Why should the boys have all the fun? She has to get Vegeta one of those :-)
Who is the surprise? Who's left? I'm on tender-hooks here please don't keep us waiting long (turns own puppy dog eyes on Sefiru, but realises they aren't a patch on Goku's, sulks).
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