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eep! exhibitionst! and leather, a clear favourite ^^
and I'm so happy you've continued with this ^0^/

so hot..a public scene

I'm ready for the next chapter I don't know about anyone else!

Love this story, at times it's made me grin from ear to ear, especially the public scene. The outfits and the humans reactions were great, I can almost see them squirming. You write these kind of relationships really well, which ever one is sub or dom. And no, I don't think you've gone too far at all (encourages Sefiru to go further).

What plan are Vegeta and Goku going to discuss? Ohh can't wait, I just know it will be great :-)

O.O My, my! Leather DOES look good! I had no idea that a public display meant going at it like bunnies in front of all of Goku's friends! lol! Hope someone had a camera!

Woo! That was quite the fic! I've actually read it before, but never had the chance to review it. *slaps hand* shame, shame on me. And Bravo on your rant against Anon. Those type of short-sighted people really burn me.

It's nice to see you did your research on BDSM relationships and you did a great job of portraying one between Vegeta and Goku. In fact, this fic was the best I've seen in its genre!

“Uh, I won’t harm my family. I won’t do violence in cold blood. And, um, I won’t actually eat shit.”

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Oh God, I guess I laughed for a whole hour. Good, Goku. Scat is bad for you.

Liked this one pretty much too. But still prefer Unbroken :)

^^ my deepest respect goes out to you for actually knowing [whether through research or personal experience] about the type of relationship you wrote about here.
i really wish you would've written the scene when kakarott was given that beautiful collar you described. ::sniffle.:: i still remember the first time i had a collar placed around my throat. it was such a wonderful experience. ^^ so if you write another story of this nature. and anyone gets given a collar. you should really, really, really write that scene. <333

OMGS! I love this story. And I love how you depict BSDM relationships. And you're right, not alot of people understand them. One very large misconception is that the dominant has total forced control. This is not the case. The sub gives up control to the dominant and at the end of the day, the sub is really in control. Everything is done according to what the SUB wants. And at any time the sub can stop the play if they feel uncomfortable. Anyway, I love your story. XD

Most definitely agree with you, Sefiru, about the BDSM relationship discussion. Both that there are healthy BDSMs and that the characters of DB are very good for use within that genre in fanfiction. Mostly so because they're already so used to pain and perhaps in a way thrive in the feeling and sensing part of pain/pleasure, which I believe might be the real reason for someone entering a BDSM relationship, for the feelings it evokes. And also, in a way I think that maybe BDSM partners might be able to trust each other more than "regular" pertners, because they trust the other enough to let them "hurt" them in the bedroom.
I might be bad to put my thoughts in words ^^; but point is anyway: I agree with you (however that might matter or not >>).
Continue your great work, there are those who love and whorship your writing (yes, nerds mostly)!