rate_review Reviews

I’m not against BDSM or people who choose this sexual practice, in fact I’ve read many exquisite pieces of BDSM in which the characters weren’t portrayed as unworthy beings and I’ve enjoyed them very much. I’m only against the way you and some other people, using BDSM as excuse, portray this couple as unworthy trash (I insist on it), for instance Vegeta renouncing to his title just because his only desire is to have a cock stuck up his ass; or Goku’s attitude in this fic; with things like that you make them seem stupid and worthless. Funny, all this ranting, when it’s precisely you who are portraying those who practice BDSM without any dignity.

I've been reading a lot of these fanfics now and I have to say I'm very impressed with yours. There seem to be very few authors that will actually write about a functional BDSM relationship and not just go in for the absolute control, possessive, rape crap. I'm very impressed with your story.
Also, I read your new comments chapter on this story and as far as 'anon' is concerned, I wouldn't pay them any mind if I were you. They obviously don't understand the difference between the kind of BDSM you are writing and the kind that seems to run rampent in every fandom on this site. Most likely they are simply looking for something to be indignent about without actually having to give it any real thought.
Again, congrats on a great story. I can't wait for a new chapter.

Breaking his tail? Ouch ^^; *shruggs* Ah, well, pain sort of suits Goku...
Really cute how Vegeta realised his eariler faults, he really does love Goku! Yay!

Pure Evil Omakes you say? You certainly know how to entertain your crowd ;3

Pure Evil 4?! *dances out of (nerd-)happiness* Gah! So good! XD

Disgusting how you portray this couple in all your stories. I’m just tired that lately so many people are writing this kind of stuff. If there’s one word to define Goku and Vegeta that would be dignity, they’re proud and honorable, and portraying them as sick and worthless trash not only shows that you don’t understand these characters at all but it’s insulting for all the people that really love this couple and yaoi. With all this pointless fics you are only giving reasons for homophobic people to be more intolerant and hateful. A pity.

You should bring Krillin back, only this time have him walk in on them. Make it believable, not like he was spying on them or something. They get to frisky somewhere not private enough and Bam! in walks poor Krillin. Nothing to extreme in the torture department, because Krillin would try to save his friend. I don't want to here about Krillin torture, nearly giving him a stroke yes, nearly getting him killed no. Hmmm, what's Bulma's take on all this or maybe some of the others.

wow i loved this chapter..im happy vegeta buried his pride and said sorry

Vegeta arguing with Krillin, this I have got to see. Update soon.

Aww, he let Kakarott brush his tail! How cute ^^ (I didn't even know they did that, hehe)
I just love the dominant Vegeta, funny how he's so stubborn. But that's just Veggi for you X3
Nice work (as usual ^^), I'm gonna read Enough Time as soon as I have some time (hopefully now ;D).

This is great! I'm more used to their names being Gokou, Bejita, & Kuririn or something, but still -- very good. I'll be waiting for an update, ja? <33

wow me love the chapter