rate_review Reviews

Sweet. I like the 2 of them together.

Wow, this story is amazing. I adore your writing style. There's a good balance there, with Roy being sentimental but not mushy and Edward is perfect, no other way to descrive him. I'm going to stalk the rest of your stories now. ^^

I feel kind of bad. You don't get much love over here...

This is actually one of my favorites of yours. A beautiful one-shot, enough story but not too much to make the reader want another chapter. (That probably sounds weird...but that's the point of a one-shot, right? I think that when the reader feels that the story should continue, then the one-shot really hasn't served it's purpose.) I love your Ed. He's very much what I would imagine him to be as he ages.

Thanks for putting this up over here! I'd love to see AFF start getting some really good authors again. Lately it seems mediocre.

peace and love :D
mirandler43

oh...wow!! that was so great!! I loved the converstation between these two!! it was excelent!! sublime! exquisite!! I could keep going but I'm still caught up in the greatness of it XD

kiki

Phenomenally well down. The angst and unspoken sentiment gives depth and realism to this story that I have rarely seen. It was very well written and believable. Your style of writing turned a PWP into a fantastic novella. From one author to another…Bravo

Gawd-awful, super-sized font, *grumble* ack. In more conducive news, I enjoyed this story very much. I'm a huge fan of all of your stories, and I even converted a new reader for you out of someone who doesn't like Roy/Ed as a pairing! I credit that victory to you, not myself. Kudos!

I would just like to say how much I enjoyed this story of yours. I have read most of your other stories and I find myself re-reading them often.
I liked the character development in this, small tho' it was you can see where the growth is and it was done realistically.
Thank you once again.

silken :)