rate_review Reviews

is it okay if i kinda take your idea?

*Cries like an idiot* Oh... Oh this was SO touching. This was much better than another fic I read with roughly the same idea. I loved this one very much... But the hopleless romantic in me wants a happier ending in which Ed returns and there is much love. Still, this was beautiful. I didn't notice too many mistakes, really. Then again, I am not very good with grammar and spelling in less its very obvious. ^^; Great job on this one... Truely a bittersweet story.