rate_review Reviews

I like it too! For some reason I love anime AU's and there are very very few FMA AU's that are worth reading. This one has a lot of potential I think. XD I always think that if Roy wasn't a military man, he'd be a lot more naughty. The idea of him as a gangster is uber cool.

Are you going to have Hughes in here? It's always good to see Hughes. And how are you working in the homunculi? Are they going to be just regular people, or are they going to be humunculi, or are they going to be humans with special powers? What's it gonna be? I really want to know!

According to the summ, you're working in my two favorite FMA pairings, so I'll be checking this for updates. Please keep working on it!

O M F G the world needs more of that, and i think its your civic duty as the mother of this great and wonderful fic to give us more. otherwise i might predict a riot ... or maybe we'll send you mooninites dressed up as explosives and they'll have to close your city

Look promising, but you might want to have another skim for spelling. But that's just me.

Mmm, I do love me some tied up and raped Edward. One suggestion as far as your formatting goes: in English, we start a new paragraph each time someone new starts speaking.