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*giggle* ohhh that curiousity again. i liked it!!! ^^
i also like the innocence you gave gohan and the normality you gave goku.
you know? that chichi is dead, doesnt mean that goku is errh...well...out of "order" ? Oo*
ummh, that he has no needs anymore. yah. mightiest worrior, a hero and so on, but of course also
a men with needs. ( well yes. cant describe it better. sorry for that.)^^
but i hope you´ll get the sence out of it. :) oh and did i ever mentioned,
that your lemons are very hot and
really great and passionful, written!? so if not, than i think i did it, now.
bye! ^^

Hey! I like Nix's idea! Gohan and Goten should do stuff to Goku while he's asleep! lol!

I read this awhile back and THOUGHT I reviewed, but apparently I didn't. Great ficcy :)

UH! what a disgusting fic! (This is what an asshole would say)

OhfuckFuckFUCK!whatanamazingstory,it...was...so...hot! *dazed and drooling* (This is what an intelligent person would say.)

I guess you can figure out which I am. *drools some more*

Sequel?

i like it FAIR amount of Incest good story all togeter a good pice of i want more chap's so get to work

This is really good. Can u make a story where...

1-Gohan and Goten
2-Gohan/goten does stuff to Goku while he sleeps.

Thanks for reading

this is a very very good fanfiction, excellent details and do you plan on making any extra chapters onto it or possibly a sequel? I'd be more than eager to read one, thanks for writing this ^^

Wow. Good sex scenes X3
Maybe you could do more? Gohan does grow up after all *hint,hint*
I know incest is wrong and all (because it is out here in the real world), but everything is allowed in love and war -- and fandom! haha!
Great fic, reall like your other stuff too XD

Whoa! That was un-natrually HOT!! I actually had to stop reading several times, just to calm down!! *blushes* I felt a nose-bleed coming on...

That was really great! Ignore any flames(if you get any), I loved it!

-Niiro Yuuyake