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October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fic, just the right amount of dominance from Goten. I also liked the 'ritual', not too complicated, but fitting for a Saiyan. Thanks for writing this!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was sort...different and kinky
not used to reading whipping and spanking, but I can image saiyajins doing this though, (biting is more kinker for me XD)
and poor trunks living with a prince for a father!
Actually like Seme!Goten fics; new twist on whole top/bottom thing, (like reading gaalee/leegaa.) the lemon was hot and I actually....didn't mind reading the whipping, even though it's not for me
great job
not used to reading whipping and spanking, but I can image saiyajins doing this though, (biting is more kinker for me XD)
and poor trunks living with a prince for a father!
Actually like Seme!Goten fics; new twist on whole top/bottom thing, (like reading gaalee/leegaa.) the lemon was hot and I actually....didn't mind reading the whipping, even though it's not for me
great job
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*winks* i like it better that way too:)