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One of the main reasons I love rereading this? All those hints at who Dante really is.

Okay, so I've read this story about 5 or 6 times (sometimes I get confused between this story and the canon...) and just noticed one of the biggest hints to who Dante is in Ch45. There was a pretty big hint during one of the party scenes when the kids where 11 or so I think, but it was still pretty vague. But I can't believe I never saw THIS hint until now...*facepalm*

...YAY!!! great story, i loved this SOOOOOOOOO much!!!!!! it was so good i don't know how to put it into words. i called every couple before it happened (officially) in both this and the first one (except possibly armstrongxrose, i can't remember...), and a lot of random stuff like: frank and kain finally adopting; it being nina; aideen being pregnant again; ect., ect. ... anyway!! great job, it was wonderful, and i look forward to 'the rest of the story'!!

HOWEVER!! the one thing i did not see, not at all, not until it SMACKed me in the face, was dante already having aideen. that was just: ZOMG!!! HOLY!! WHAAAAAT?????!!!!?!

yeah. pretty much. great fics, and i love them and you!!~

ps: evermist (my sis) says hindsights a bitch.~

^^ Excellent work. I just read almost this whole story in three days, because I have have that little of a life. :D I really, /really/ liked this. I suspected about Dante a couple of times, but not very seriously until it was spelled out to me. And I'd been rooting for Nicholas and Victor ever since the kiss on the cheek when they were teens. Glad everybody got to be happy in the end, and I'm sure The Rest of the Story will be really good, too. Keep writing!

ahhh that was such a good story i loved it soo much this was definatley the best fan fic for fma i have ever read!!!!! I absolutley loved it even though there were some sad parts i think it shouldnt have been written any other way though i do feel bad for russel and how he doesnt have wrath it still rocks! i cant wait to start the side stories

It took me a week to read this all.
And it was well worth the effort, good job.

*sigh* Ok. First off, I want to say I'm sorry for the way I sounded in my last review. I came down on you kinda hard and that was wrong of me. I don't take back 'what' I said but I do regret 'how' it was said. I've been feeling really bad about this since I reviewed and felt you were due an apology. So, I apologize. The rant about pregnant brides had nothing to do with any sort of religious doctrine (i.e. the whole saving yourself for marriage thing) or that getting pregnant before the "I do's" made you some sort of slut (Aideen definitely was NOT one of those!). It was from previous bad experiences with women who used their hormones as an excuse to say and do whatever they wanted and just expected you to do as they demanded no matter how outrageous without saying anything back. (We won't even discuss the one gold digger who used her baby to trap the baby's daddy!) These bitches make the ones on Bridezilla look tame! :) I stand by my comments on Nikki barging in on Ed and Roy right at the very end. That hurt me. I felt having her there was wrong but it's your story so you can end it any way you want and I just have to deal with it and accept it. For me, it would have been best to have it end where it all began, with just Roy and Ed together. That's my two cents and that's probably all it's worth! XD I hope you understand me a little better now and accept my apology. Email me at jill_emory@hotmail.com if you want to give me your own two cents! :)
Koneko =^.^=

O_O
*cries*
I truly loved this story!
It's amazing!
I must say to you that you are one amazing author!
I'm terribly happy with how it ended....and yet I'm really sad that it's over. T.T
Once again, truly amazing and beautifully written! ^.^

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's over (*geesh rysh calm down) I can't help it Af this one has to be one of my faves in fma yaoi (* i know mine too but we can always re-read it laterz) *grin* keep up the great work with your writing and thanks from the whole gang here in our new home.
Rysh Af their mates their brother and cats

So very cute! i did enjoy following this one and it was nice to see it end well for everyone. Thanks for taking the time to write the beast and share it with us. :D Reading your stories gave me a new friend to treasure. *hug*