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O.O Tucker's coming back isn't he? DANG IT!!! well, keep doing a great job!! can't wait for the next chapter! later

would that be tucker? i can't quite remember if he died or not. anyway, this was a good chapter. i'm sad about pinako, and i'm sad for ed who just lost a member of his family and now he'll get word about dante. *sighs*

and that little thing about wrath ignoring russell after the blond kissed that girl... was he jealous, or was that just wrath being very interested in the metal thingy? well, can't wait for the next chapter!

YAY! I love this! it's getting really good... not that it wasn't good before, but it's getting amazing ;)! can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this chapter.
I have been trying to find the proper way to say you do such cute lemons, It still sounds funny as I type it. For her and for him didn't have a lot , seemed to always make it all the more sweet when you do add them.

I am really feeling sorry for the Roy of our world, he really needs Frank.

I like your Fletcher and Russell better any other version out there including the anime. I never really liked them I guess I am just weird :/.
I really like yours.

On good days, he decided that meant those jobs weren’t part of the “wifely” role, and on bad days, he at least felt a step more manly than Al.
I just love that way too Ed and cute.
Thanks again for the great story and all the time you put into it.

LOL!! I love Ed's revenge!! Take that, Ms Polce, and don't call back!! ;) Love it, love it, love it!!! Bet the old biddy thinks twice before she dials that number again!! I don't know what it is but it is fun to mess with people on the phone - especially when they're (a) talking to someone you don't give a damn about or (b) someone you know you can mess around with! :D [side note: Telemarketers are LOTS of fun to mess with!! *evil giggles* But I digress! ;)] It was awfully nice of Frank to give Roy that can of salve! One would think that after 10 years of marriage that either Roy or Ed would have discovered it before now - especially the way these two go at it!! Like rabbits indeed! :D

I'm glad Wrath finally got his voice back and Ed's reaction to realizing it was typical for him. "Holy shit! You’re talking!" *giggle* So much for not cussing in front of the kids!! :D I am slightly confused on one thing tho. If Wrath is completely human now, why did his body try to merge with the cobblestones when he got near the Gate? I thought he was only capable of doing that when he was a homunculus. I remember when it happened before in Munich and it seemed strange then too. Why and how is he still able to do that?

I'm hoping that Mustang will be the one to help close the Gate. (Remember: Mustang - Munich, Roy - Amestris. It's my own personal logic that more than likely makes no sense to anyone else and is probably more complicated than it needs to be. Same as Edward, Frank - Munich and Ed, Archer - Amestris. *sigh* moving on...) Mustang seems to be the only one who would be willing do it. If he does end up helping our side (i.e. the Amestrisian side. I SOOO just made up that word! There has to be a way to use Amestris as an adjective, right? *sigh* And look at me - "our" side. I just went and involved myself in this! :D) then the Gate can finally be closed and everyone saved! No one has to go thru the Gate to do it! yay!! Eckhart *wipes tongue to rid it of the foul taste that name leaves* will be furious enough to kill him but, Lord willing, he'll escape and she will bite the big one!! YES!! I like it!! I wonder if in the fallout of Mustang's betrayal (here I go assuming things again!) if he will suffer an injury much like Roy's. hmm... Oh gee, if the Gate closes Hohenheim can't come back to Amestris. What a shame that would be - NOT!!!! *evil grin*

It's true. Roy and Ed's lives haven't ever really been normal. "Normal" is just a matter of perspective tho really. *smiles and shakes head* pausing in the middle of sex to draw an array. Only you Ed! :) Hey! Since I involved myself in this drama earlier, count me in to help carry that burden too!! ;) w00t!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

OMG!!!! are the ppl in the real world place gonna be good guys or bad guys?? and yay!! wrath is getting over edward! now that he's working with russel i think they'd be a good pairing.......man this story has the most unusual pairings ever and yet they work so well.......i can't wait for an update!! ^^

i had some catching up to do. but this is certainly getting interesting. and oh, that little scene between russel and wrath...! no, he didn't stop loving edward, no! sure, maybe russel's right that edward wasn't wrath's true love or soul mate, but that doesn't mean he stopped loving him!

and what does whats-her-face hope to gain by having all those men try to learn from dante's info? i guess they could learn it if you wanted them to, though... dammit, i hate bad guys. anyway, i look forward to the next update.

and the plot thickens!!!!!!!!! getting really interesting!!! can't wait for an update! later.

This was really great, thanks for the warning of little Roy Ed ;).
Seriously Great addition to the plot. Kimblee and Tucker back wow.

Poor Wrath losing his voice over the guilt of falling out of love with Edward that was just so incredibly sad. I am glad Russell got him to talk.

You are amazing , I love this so much. You really do update quick
I can't wait until the next chapter

Kimblee, Armstrong, Mustang, and Shou friggin' Tucker. Damn. What a bunch of losers! A "bishop" (WTH?? talk about giving the Church a bad rep!), a miner, and two right damnable bastards! (In my head, I refer to this world's Roy Mustang as Mustang and the Amestris Roy Mustang as Roy. It helps me to keep them straight much like with Ed and Edward. It doesn't matter to me how the others are referred to as I don't particulary care for them. ooo! bitchy! :D) Eckhart *blecch!* really doesn't give a damn who she uses as long as she gets what she wants. damn bitch. I guess since you've teased me for 29 chapters now that it was time that the psycho bitches finally made their grab for power. I've been dreading this like the plague *cries* but part of me is pleased that the opportunity to eliminate these two has finally come!

It worries me that there will need to be someone on the other side of the Gate helping Ed et al so as to finally close the damn thing. Who will it be? Who will be a hero and turn their back on Eckhart and save the day? *gasp* Oh damn! Here's a horrific thought!! Will someone from Amestris have to cross the Gate to BE that someone to help close the Gate? *shivers* I don't even wanna think about that!! *cries*

*still pouting* Yeah, I know. Everybody's gotta age and change, grow old and *winces and cringes* eventually die. *sobs wildly* GAH! Now I've gone and totally depressed myself again! WHAAAAAA! *throws self on floor and has a royal temper tantrum* I am hoping that Aideen kicks Dante's ass as a bit of revenge for when Dante threatened Aideen before she was even born. mmmm! I like this idea! I hope Wrath gets a crack at her too for how she treated him. Hell, everybody deserves to stomp her ass and I hope she is utterly destroyed in a blaze of alchemical annihilation! MWHAHAHAHA!

I'm glad Wrath finally got his voice back! Well, more like found the will to speak that is. I'm not really sure if I like Russell or not even tho he was a big help to Wrath. There's just something about him that rubs me the wrong way. He seems very suspicious like he's got a hidden agenda or something. He's arrogant and condescending as hell that's for sure! Obviously it took someone with this attitude to make Wrath admit the ugly truth and regain his voice. Wrath should still punch his lights out for speaking so poorly of the dead! poor Edward! *cries* poor Wrath too! Now he has to relive it all and somehow make peace with it in order to move on. How does one get absolution from the dead anyway?

Loved the little PDA interaction between Roy and Ed!! Roy is completely shameless groping Ed like that and I'm lovin' every minute of it!! Ed's not really much better since he blew Roy practically right in front of the prime minister! *giggle* They're totally perfect for one another!! Can't wait to see how Ed ups the ante!! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=