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Dude, Ed so won that arguement! The plan fior revenge was awesome too!

Yeah, i got nothing, but i'm enjoying it!

seriously, i thought it said, "i swear you're part car." as in, ed's heavy. then i read it again. ahaha. and that was a nice trick on the kids' part. and jesus, raine really knows how to make people uncomfortable, ne? great chapter. until next time.

Yay! Another chapter! I like the plan that the children had used against the reporter ^_^ The reporter is a "stinkybutt poopyhead" who only wants to make a quick buck....O.o

Yea, I'm a weird one.

Coat check room!! That's the word I wanted but couldn't think of when I mentioned them having sex in public! All I could think of when I wrote my last review was "a room not far from the one where the ball in his honor is taking place". I knew I knew what that room was called but it just wouldn't come out of my head! I'm glad one of us knew what I was talking about! ;) The sex was awesome (as usual!) and I have to give major props to Ed for remembering to bring along a condom! *giggle* It would be most embarrassing to have to explain away certain stains on "the Great Fuhrer of Amestris"! w00t! Love that description! :D Wrath's TMI moment was funny! :) Sometimes you just don't need or want all the down and dirty details about some stuff! ;)

Aideen is so grown up! Wearing grown-up shoes and everything! The fact that said shoes brought her up past her daddy's chin even though she's only 10 years old is proof enough of the bittersweet truth that she'll be an adult before you know it. *sad smile* Good gracious these kids are growing up so fast!! Nicholas is still a bit of a hellion tho! typical little boy! :) I liked the way she handle herself with the reporter. Wrath's clever use of his cane was a nice touch too! I hope Wrath finds somebody to be with soon. I still feel bad for him because he's still missing Edward. poor guy. *wibbles* Even tho I'm not 100% in Frank's corner, I wish him well with Kain. Oh and, Dante can eat worms and die any day now. Die bitch die! *raspberries* :P LOL! Mature no? :D Hey! I just realized I didn't get any props in the shout-outs! *pretend sniffle* no love for me. *pretend tears* It's not like I "need" the acknowledgement or anything. *dies laughing at her own asininity!*
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. Hail to the fuhrer! XD

Okay, I'm not trying to change this review. The Awww was long, and was messing with the formatting of my screen. So The Candy Made Me Do It, I kept everything just like you wrote it, just made the awww a little shorter, though I appreciate the sentiment.
The Candy Made Me Do It 2007-04-25
-points to FrankxKain, jumping up and down- AwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwW!! So cute! :3

As for el bra situation... Gawd, the talk... -shudder- That was one of the most horrifing days EVER

And then we have Ed and his little crushes. Damn, I would've been pissed if I was Roy. Le joke was NOT funny, Ed! -wags finger-

Update soon! :3

oh, that was a cruel joke ed played. and if aideen is maturing so much faster than expected, wouldn't that derail plans for dante to take her body? if she still had designs on the girl, that is. really great chapter, and i'm digging the frank/kain. can't wait for the next one!

*rolling on the floor laughing* XD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!!!!! I love it! that was frickin' hilarious with the whole Frank and Kain thing. Love how you pulled that one! XD poor Roy, tries to be nice and look what happens. That joke really blew up in Ed's face huh? Wonder how he's planning to get out of this one. hmmmm... well! LATER!

The move with the cane was brillant.

wow i go away for a few days and theres a gazillion updates.........I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! also........is fuery and frank gonna get together? i think they'd be really cute..........and i hope poor wrath doesn't stay lonely either!

Whoa, i was like four or 5 chapters behind!! i would like to say that the relationship you're starting to explore with Fuery and Stephen is rather interesting. I'd like to see where you take it. Still enjoying the stories, and curious to see how the gate between the 2 worlds plays out with Dante leading Eckhart's efforts. And Hohenhiem= <3!