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that was great. ^___________^ funny, and a bit heartwarming too, what with the necklace ed still has and all. well, i agree with ed that a little bit of fear in frank is a good thing. and i like that he made a friend with kain. kain always seemed so... left out somehow. anyway, great chapter. i look forward to the next one.

lol, the joys of parenthood. XD loved that! great chapter. Although.... I got a little ticked at Frank on that one... but I guess he redeemed himself somewhat. Love the chapter!!

frank should be damn glad he remembered to remove roy's gloves, cause had it been me, i would've fried his ass. i don't like it when people make a fool of my roy *pouts*

anyway, i look forward to the next chapter, and more on how wrath is progressing.

Wooo, Roy's back with Ed.

Woooah, Frank is GOOD!! Not even Havoc did all that well. (Loved that episode, but I liked it when ROY dressed up as HAVOC :3)

Gasp, Frank kissed Roy? Just to prove a point?! -double gasp-

Loved this chapter, and, omg, the twins inturrupting what could've been somethin'... Hawt XD Ha ha, update soon... I just noticed, I say "loved this chapter" for every chapter... Well... Maybe 'cause they're all awesome! :D

GAH!! You are an evil tease!!!! *bangs fist on desk* :D First you make me mad as hell with Frank kissing Roy and threatening him with a knife and then, just when I think there's gonna be a yummy little RoyEd moment to make up for this effrontery, you kick me in the head with the twins interrupting things!! No fair!! Go back to bed little children! *angrily pouts* Damnation and hellfire! *seething* Where the hell does that sorry son-of-a-bitch God-forsaken bastard asshole Frank get off thinking he has a right to know what is in Roy's personal files?!? How dare he impersonate Roy and break into his office!! How dare he kiss Roy and threaten him like that!! *shaking with rage and screeching* How! dare! he!! *livid and breathing hard* Ok. *deep breaths* Granted Roy needed to learn his lesson about letting his guard down so easily but did it have to come at the cost of my sanity? :) It probably is a good thing Roy wants Frank to join his military. Keep your friends close and your enemies closer! ;) With Frank doing shit like this, he's no different from the Archer we all hate. I wish now that Sig had beaten the absolute living hell out of him more than he did. If Frank steps out of line again, I hope Ed is there to give him a good taste of what automail can really do!! *evil grin* And to think I was willing to give this Frank bastard a chance. *derisive snort* No bloody way in hell that's happening now! :P
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

well, i've just finished reading both stories and i'm impressed. they are very well written.......i was so sad when edward died.....*sigh* well keep up the good work it's also exciting to see how often you update........i look forward to reading more

"I outlasted you." Love it! So typically Ed! XD The phone sex was great! What is it about phone sex that's so erotic? Maybe it's the rush you get knowing you managed to arouse and satisfy another person with just the sound of your voice. Whatever it is, it's so hot! :) Archer and Fuery seem to be getting rather friendly now. What's that about? Something going on here you wanna share with the rest of the class? ;) Oh! And what's this about Frank spending a night with "Falman and Roy's sister"? Are Falman and Raine living together now? You go girl! w00t! :) Ed gets bored and invents a fridge/freezer combo. hunh. Must be nice to be that creative/inventive! :) I never heard of banana slices dipped in orange juice before. Learn something new every day. :) I hope Sig can reach Wrath. Something's gotta give and soon! Sig always makes me think of a great big grizzly bear. That is one mountain of a man! :D feh. Eckhart and Dante. blecch. I'm hoping that somehow once these two finally meet they will destroy each other. I don't even wanna think about the hellacious destruction they will cause when this meeting happens! *whimper* I just pray that no one else gets hurt or killed along with them! *cries*
Koneko =^.^=

Aww! Nicholas is such a dear sweet kid! Taking those cookies and milk to Wrath was adorable! He seems to be a gentle natured soul like his uncle Al. :) "Daddy didn’t make them, so they’re good." funny!! "Daddy learned to cook a lot of stuff when Aideen and I were babies, but he still burns anything he puts in the oven." LOL!! Ed sounds like me!! XD I'm becoming wary about Aideen's interest in machines and weapons from the other side of the gate. That's a deep subject for a nine-year-old to be so fascinated with. prodigies. sheesh. I'd like to think that her mechanically inclined fascination means that she's starting to show signs that she'll grow up to be a gearhead like her auntie Winry because I fear the danger/trouble that a pursuit of that kind of scientific knowledge could get her into. She's too smart for her own good. *sigh* so like her daddy. :( Glad to see that Sig and Archer have settled their differences (kinda) and that Wrath is on the mend. It makes me sad tho that he can't speak. "And I don’t know if your boyfriend was anything like my daddy aside from how much he looked like him, but I know Daddy doesn't like seeing you like this. Would he?" Ah, out of the mouths of babes! Such clarity of vision they have! :) Nicholas did almost make me cry when he said that he wished he could have known his mom even for just a little while. *wibble* I had a momentary flashback when Ed fussed at Nicholas and called him by his first and middle names. :) I always knew how much trouble I was in depending on how my mom said/called/yelled my name! The more of my name she used, the more trouble I was in! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

OoOoOoOohhh, cookies

Anyways! Ouch... I don't even think there are words to describe sparring with Sig -stares at chapter- ... Well, apparently, there are but, that's not the point. Sounds like it hurt... a lot

And... Omg, noooooooo WRATH CANNOT SPEAK?!?! The HORROR!!! -faint-

Update soon! -faints again-

AWWWWW!!!YAY!!! GO Nicholas!!!! I loved it... and your right... that seemed like a good place to stop. Keep writing hon!!!!