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yet once again another term that i don't know. what does rim mean?

i knew it was archer the minute roy started heading for him. ahaha. i just thought it strange that everyone else has the same name but him. eh, not important, cause that was an awesome twist.

i can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully when wrath and ed (they both better be alive) meet up with roy and ed. and i can believe in archer. if he hadn't have looked so sinister in the anime, i would have thought he was a good guy until he went all psycho. update soon!!

i find it funny that both eds were having sex at the same time, one rather experienced, and the other... not so much.

anyways, this chapter was hawt and awesome, and i am dying for some answers, so update soon!!

So the vicious bitch Eckhart strikes again!

I found the Mustang sibling's vanity over their graying hair hilarious btw.

...yeah.. i got nothing...

i knew hughes would do something stupid; he did in the movie. anyway, good chapter, though i feel bad for roy and ed. you said something about lemon... does that mean their relationship gets better? i hope so.

now that i think about it, i don't know if envy has the patience to pretend to be stephen - though he has a good reason - so i'll wait to find out who he is. i look forward to the next chapter!

ok great chapter and if i had to guess who stephen is i would say frank archer but i might be going out on a limb for that. boy those twins are sumthing else man, esp, lil aideen that girl is a spitfire that has both her father's attitudes. i luv nicholas though, he is so cute. cant wait to read more oh wats up wit dat drachman attacking our guys? someone's gonna get it XD

*jaw drop* NOOOOOO!!!!! well, I can't keep you from killing him.. it is your story... BUT DAMN!!!! neither Hughes can catch a break!!!! anyway, I do love the direction of your story and the Raine Falman thing is priceless! can't wait for an update!!!

I loved the first story and this is just as good but if you kill hughes off (I don't care if this one is a dirty nazi bastard) I'll hunt you down bish!

I want to give a thorough review but its one of those nights where it's cold, rainy, and my eyes are about to close on me of thier own will. I liked the chap though and can't wait to see what Ed does next with this whole situation goin on. Update soon.

Hey! Raine and I are almost the same age! She's just a smidgen older than me tho! ;) I think she and Falman should give it a go and see what happens. Could be fun! :D That skunk stripe hair is just the worst. poor thing. :) Better her than me! I wonder if Fuery will find someone at the strip club to keep him company! *snerk*

Ed put Roy out of their bed for a whole month?!? Damn. And I thought I could hold a grudge! :) Your description of Ed dressed in all that tan and brown made me think of his outfit from the movie. Movie Ed looked so different from how he'd always looked (all black with that distinctive red coat) in the anime. All that somber brown just seemed to bring out even more the growing hopelessness and loneliness he was feeling. It made me all misty-eyed anyway. Thankfully such is not the case now as he is in a much better place! Swatting Roy on the ass was great!! :D I wished Ed had roughed up that damned would-be assassin tho! grr!! But, with all the little eyes present, such wasn't really an option. dammit. I guess that since he didn't pulverize the guy on the spot that Ed has really grown up a lot and learned self-control. Still woulda been nice if he'd cracked him upside the head just once. *sigh* Maturity is so overrated sometimes! :P LOL!!

I will only say this about Roy and Edward not being together - Fate is a cruel mistress. Fate put Riza and Roy together before Edward even had so much as a ghost of a chance with him. blecch. fickle fate. I could get all catty and blame Riza for everything. Hey, it'd be easy enough to do. It's not like I got all that upset when Amestris Riza died anyway. (ouch. bitchy!) But, whatever. Their not being together is a thorn in my side that I'll just have to put up with though I can't promise I won't grouse about it ever again! :)

It's about time we had some smex around here!!! I can't remember the last time something juicy happened. hmm. Let's investigate. *scans thru previous chapters* Chapter 2. Ed and Roy on Roy's desk. good grief! That was 10 chapters and 7 years of story timeline ago! That makeout session with Wrath and Edward two chapters ago doesn't really count. Man, that's a LONG dry spell! I'm not sure who will enjoy the next chapter more - me or Wrath! :D hmm. Wrath and Edward. *sigh* I'm probably the only one here who finds this pairing to be a tad squicky. I don't know why my stubborn little brain won't wrap itself around this concept. so resistant. just ain't happenin'. dyed in the wool obstinant Roy/Ed fangirl!! :)

auf Wiedersehen herr Hughes. Been nice knowin' ya! Shoulda minded your own business! Man, Eckhart's a bitch! Speaking of bitches, where's Dante been all this time? She's been quiet for far too long and that scares me. The both of them need to be run over repeatedly by freight trains as soon as possible! Death to Eckhart and Dante! *evil laughter* Ah! I'd almost forgotten my rant from so long ago! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=