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PHEW!!! they're ok! awwwww, That was cute with Ed and Roy when he started crying. HAHA!!! TOLD YOU!!! I KNEW IT!!!! lol, love the chapter and I can't wait to see where this goes!!! later!

Ah! I finally got to read the 4 new chapters. I'm so behind on my fanfic reading it isn't even funny.

Love how the plot is moving foward, though i was a little confused whenDante showed up. I suppose we never really did find out what happened to her. I'm also curious as to how she was controlling the suit of armor from the other side.

I was also curious as to when you were gonna have Ed and Wrath 'share affections.' the way you were going, it could have been brotherly, or more, what with lack of family or loss of close family to use to your advantage. okay... i'm gonna go to sleep now, i look foward to the next chapter, and hopefully i'll be able to read it right away like i wan to next time! :D

O_O! OH MY FREAKING GOD!! :D Edward and Wrath kissing?!? *jaw drops to floor* I had been thinking for the last little while that there was a certain closeness between Edward and Wrath but the clues were subtle and easily dismissed so I wasn't sure if there was something there or not. Oh wow! I was all, "*gasp* Oh shit! Did that just happen?" I so did not see that coming! :) I thought for sure that when Edward met Roy that there would be sparks between them but, oh man!, when Edward said, "I don't like older men.", I was like, "Oh hell. not good." and then the kiss! O_O Man, you could have knocked me over with a feather! Edward and Wrath. serious relationship or desperate need for human contact. just kinda boggles the mind. damn. whew. wow. It's not a bad thing that you've surprised the hell out of me. I may develop a new interest in the Munich part of the story after all! LOL! ;)

You do realize that you're seriously killing me with this chapter right? I went from panic thinking the babies were gonna die to afraid because Ed didn't seem to react to the situation to fury because that bitch did that to those sweet little innocent babies to the afore mentioned shock/surprise of the kiss to crying my eyes out when Ed finally did break down. Good Jesus! You put me thru all kinds of hell in just one chapter! :D Aideen sounded so pitiful when she woke up and said her belly still hurt. GAH! I can't take it! *cries* poor baby! I just wanna hug her and make it all better! Whew! awesome chapter!! one hell of an emotional rollercoaster! Loved it!! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

Poor Ed, he's not very good at handling emotions.

O.O NOOOOO!!!! Not the little ones!!!! Save the little ones!!! update soon!!!!

Poor babies, must suck to be the targets of everyone's attention, good or bad. Though that was a cheap shot ROy took about Ed's dad.

Oh hell no! Oh no she didn't! I forgot all about Dante! dammit! I totally forgot that there was an "old evil" that was gonna come back to haunt Roy and Ed. ARGH! I hate when I do that! :) Those poor babies having to suffer because of that bitch. I hope she hasn't done anything too horrible to them. Oh man! I just thought of something. Now I've got TWO skanks to wish horrible gruesome painful deaths on - Dante and Eckhart. *sigh* I was looking for there to be more action and less fluff and look what I got - two frightened fathers, two sick children, two worlds in danger, and two megalomaniacal biotches. (Hey! Look at the all the twos! freaky. :D) As they say, be careful what you wish for because you just might get it! :D

Oh, before I forget, I really do like the Munich part of the story even tho I almost never mention it except in passing. I'm just a huge Roy/Ed fan and everything else tends to fall by the wayside. I like Wrath and Edward. Wrath was so sweet to try and comfort Edward like that. :) The death of Alfons will hurt Edward so badly. It's a good thing that Wrath will be there to help him, someone to lean on. I hope you forgive me for always calling Wrath Wrath and not Ulysses. Ulysses is just too hard to spell and is just plain awkward. (I had to look back at previous chapters to see how to even spell Ulysses just so I could put it in this review!) Anyway, I wish Wrath the best of luck trying to block the gate. With any luck, Wrath will find out about Dante and ruin all her plans! Ah, sweet revenge! She was as mean as the devil himself to him and deserves ruination. (Eckhart too! :P) Then, Envy can get what he/she's got coming to him/her!! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

What it me or was the chapter messed up? Anyway, this is a good chapter. I hope they close the gate.

Wow, i missed two chapters and more deveoplment already. I've been so busy i haven't been able to read as soon as they come out. Anyway, the development between Ed and Roy as parents is quite fascinating and i think you are pulling it off cleverly. Also, that last chapter touched on something that i would imagine WOULD occur if they got together, which would be the age difference and authority. They handled it quite well thuhg i think. Roy better watch that sly mouth of his. I'd hate to see him slip up too bad and have it hurt Ed...Anyway, you made the kids adorable. And this Wrath stuff or Eulysees (forgot how to spell it) is getting good. Update soon!

awwwwww.... I love Wrath... I always felt bad for him. I like the way you played that scene out... umm... the battle scene I mean ;). oh hell, it was a great chapter!!!! can't wait for the update! later!