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oooooo, I bet you Ed's gay! ;) lol, soooo KAWAII!!!! and I was having a crappy day, but that chapter seriously improved it. I loved the stink bomb thing. oh wait...that was last chapter wasn't it? O.o great now I'm confusing myself. oh well!!! great chapter, made my day!!! later!

i think i was a little confused on stephen... i thought roy's superior was stephen? but it was still very good. i am so very interested in wrath's story. great job!

YAY!!! PART TWO!!! Love it so far, but then again, when did I not like you're writing? ;) nicely done and I can't wait for the next chapter! later!

again i luv this story and this chapter was HOT!. wow roy and ed and office sex what can be hetter than that XD. i can't wait to find out wat happens to wrath and wat's in store for our two fav men. update soon XD

and the plot thickens. well, i imagine at least, since you've mentioned the thule society. and i love the little looks into roy and ed's domestic life. so cute!

Aww, poor Roy! I feel bad for him and his "image"... Ha ha, stink bomb, Wrath and Edward got 'em good. Those kids are little monkies. They're evil. And that was so adorable, yay, Al and Winry are married! That's the only time I'll EVER accept Winry. Yay, GraciaxHavoc, that's adorable and... NICHOLAS CURSED!! XD That was funny, Ed's in trouble :3

yay! another great chapter. i cant wait to find out wat happens next. i luv the twins. they r so adorable especially lil nicholas. XD/ i wonder wat will happen to wrath and edward and wat about envy. update soon XD

ROFL! Little Nicholas said a bad word! Ed's in trouble now! *giggle* Why is it that kids always know when to use bad words at just the worst possible moment? Ya gotta love 'em tho! :) Roy and Ed dancing with their children was just the best! Ah, I just melted. Gods I've become such a softie! I'm such a sucker for WAFF. The scene where they were getting ready to go to the reception and Ed brushed Roy's hair and then they just embraced one another - another melting moment! I feel a swooning fangirl moment coming on! LOL!

You only made one little mistake with the Ed/Edward thing. At the end of the first London section, you said, "Ed looked down at the paper with an expression that practically contradicted those words." It's no big deal since you've made it a point to clearly indicate sections of storyline - London and Amestris - so don't worry about it. I know who you meant. :)

I'm surprised Al and Winry aren't engaged by now. They've been sweet on each other for so long - possibly since when Ed and Roy went to Risembool to get Ed's automail fixed and she realized Ed loved Roy and not her. Hell, probably even be longer than that! :) Wedding bells are definitely in their future!

I like Edward and Wrath together. Not "together together" but you know what I mean. :) Wrath is really making Edward question the values of his world with that last little conversation they had. Good for him! One thing about Wrath tho, if he is human now why does he still have Ed's arm and leg? Did the gate just change the homunculus parts to human leaving the already human parts alone? Does his new body's skin tone match that of Ed's arm and leg? *grins* There I go being a curious kitty again! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. I understand about Roy's bad back. I'd forgotten how heavy that automail is supposed to be. poor guy. I feel for him now. *hugs Roy* I wish he'd loosen up a bit and take that mask off every once in a while - especially in front of Ed. God knows Ed sees worse than that every time he sees himself in a mirror. *Ed glares at Koneko for hugging his husband. Koneko, unfazed, hugs Ed too! :D*

are wrath and hohenheim going to find a way back to their own world? that would be so frickin' awesome! cause i was so very sad when envy killed hohenheim in the movie. (i didn't just ruin that for you, did i? you've seen the movie, right? yeah. of course you have. ^^'') anyway, great chapter, and i look forward to the next one!!

Looking good. Two things: How old is Ed? Cause if Roy is 30, that leaves Ed at 16, unless you changed it somewhere and I missed it. And, a bit over half way down, Ed got hit by Aideen's head, not Raine's.