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Very nice chapter! It started tying up a lot of loose ends nicely and answered alot of questions. Aideen's memories really shed light on the situations over the years, and the scene with the morgue was a good way of showing how the Armstrong family is dealing with their own grief.

One of the better chapters in this story, you should be proud of it.

Poor Adieen! But knocked up or not she's herself again. But OH DEAR GOD! Her child will be related to THE ARMSTRONGS! *sudders* That child will have spinal problems from being hugged by it's grandpa Alex to much. I love Sloth/Nina. I'm not sure why, I think it is that mischeifness she has, and her taking care of Frank just makes me wibble. I feel like a broken record saying this but, another amazing chapter!

Go Hohenheim! Throw the bitch to the gate! Bwahahahahahahahahaa!

I'm so wired right now I can't half hardly type! GAH!! I so don't handle emotional trauma drama well. Everybody's hurting so much! *cries* Ed's so damaged it'll be a miracle if can use automail again *sobs* (The thought of Ed confined to a wheelchair just breaks my heart! T_T "Roy carefully placed him in the chair, belting him in place." belting. *winces* like a knife in my heart.). Roy's on the verge of collapse (His whole world's suddenly gone to hell in a handbasket now hasn't it?). Fletcher...*glares savagely and growls at him* *takes several deep breaths to refrain from attacking him for touching her Roy (Yes I've laid claim to him again! XD)* Paws off Roy, Mister Tringham!. Aideen, ugh *closes eyes and massages forehead*, Aideen's PREGNANT!!! damnation and hellfire! I was so hoping she wouldn't be but, oh well. I SO hope the Gate slowly rips Dante apart bit by agonizing bit so she can feel all the pain she's caused everybody else!! *snarls* Nicholas is the only one who's not completely fucked up right now. Although with all the stuff the Gate crammed into his head there's no telling how long that'll last. *sighs* Roy and Ed's granddaughter. *shakes head* That is so blowing my mind! not exactly sure how I feel about that one. very torn. I'm cool with whatever Aideen decides to do about it tho. She's not much older than Ed was when he had the twins is she? hmm. The introductions, while seemingly completely random as hell at first, were actually kinda necessary. Roy and Ed are meeting their daughter as she really is for the first time. That is so good and so sad all at the same time. just one more thing Dante needs to burn for!! grr!!
Update soon! [so I can vent and rant some more! XD You're so tired of me doing that I'm sure. :( sorry.]
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. *wry smile* I'd forgotten about Roy and Ed's middle names! You made me flash all the way back to that time in Risembool when we first learned their middle names. :) *sighs* Times were so much happier and more innocent back then....

Oh goddess that was wonderful. **sniff sniff** thanks for the great chappy and all **offers you cyber cocoa and cookies** hope to see more soon

Rysha and Affie

even though its filled with a lot of trauma, chapter sixty one is probably the most brilliant, moving and touching chapter of this whole story arc. i thouroughly enjoyed it.

Cute! wow, um nothing to say.... bedtime... ^^;

WHOPIE! Never befor have I been happy that some one was mutalated! That bitch Dante got what she deserved! Yes! But she is still alive! What are they going to do with her? Oh! And I find it horribly funny that Hohenhiem is carrying her, she must love that! Wow, incredible again!

"What the hell were you thinking?" indeed!! Damnation and hellfire! This reckless little idiot scared the bejesus out of me!! I'd probably still be whippin' his butt for pulling such a stunt! :) I can't believe the Gate actually did something 'for' Nicholas without doing something 'to' Nicholas. It gave Nicholas what he wanted but took it's price out on someone else?? Riiight. uh-uh. I ain't buying it. The Gate's tricky and not to be trusted. Nobody gets something for nothing. Mighty suspicious. The Gate did say, "There are many things you have yet to learn". hmm. Maybe it's planning on extracting it's price at a later date. (skeptical much? :D)

I'm still not 100% sure what this "properly tied yourself to your world" stuff means. Emotional alchemy?? uh, what? @_@ What are they going to do with Dante now that she is in the doll's body? If she survives the blood loss from losing the three limbs, what's to stop her from trying to escape this broken body and attach herself to someone else? Speaking of limb loss, OMG!, Ed's a mess! T_T I hope Dante hasn't damaged his nerves beyond repair! I think I'll just break down and cry my eyes out if he can't use his automail properly anymore!! T_T I had no idea Roy could do medical alchemy! That's pretty cool!

Damn! When Phillip got shot I didn't think you'd actually kill him!! O_O whoa! I'm not torn up about it or anything, just surprised. Fare thee well, soldier boy.

At the end of the chapter when Fletcher saw everyone emerging from the tunnels, I, for some reason, got furious with him. no idea why. It's all fine well and wonderful if he helps them get to the medical help they all need but, beyond that, he needs to stay his ass out of this family's drama! Go home dammit! Leave! You're not needed here! Get out! grr!! I wish I knew why Fletcher irritates the living life out of me. It's completely irrational. But, then again, I never claimed to be rational to begin with! XD

Frank and Kain would be great parents for Sloth/Nina but how exactly does one raise a homunculus? How do you teach a soulless being right from wrong? Does she even have a conscious? How do you discipline a being that has no fear, feels no pain, and can just vanish and run away in an instant on a whim? Damned if I know. She's a creepy little thing tho. (I'm definitely aquaphobic! XD) If Frank and Kain do get to keep her, the other children she will be around and grow up with (Do homunculi grow up?) will not be kind to her. Children are vicious little beasts when they come across a kid who's different in some way. This is where that need to have a sense of right and wrong instilled in her somehow comes into play otherwise she might fly mad and drown all the other kids!! yikes!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

oh goddess somone get the net Affie's running up and down the driveway screeching (just kidding) seriously she's laughing and crying and trying to make sense... I love it too please update soon
we are looking foreward to it... oh and did Aideen's baby survive?

Rysha and Affie

it's not fair that rose lose's everybody but roy and ed. scar died and roy didn't in liore, and now philp who did nothing wrong at is died yet adieen is still alive and she is the one who acted like he raped her when she wanted it. it doesn't seem very fair espiaclly when you compare scar to armstrong and rose married that.