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Ok, this is so crazy random but I'm gonna tell you anyway. :) So, I was just in the car flipping back and forth between stations looking for something good on the radio when I happened to hear this song, "In My Daughter's Eyes" by Martina McBride. Now, I don't go for country type music but I paused on it long enough to catch some of what was said and it got me to thinking of Aideen. Bear with me on this! :) The song said something to the effect of how proud the mom was of the daughter, how much the daughter had changed her life, how she could see the future in her child's eyes, and other things about how much better the world was for having the daughter in it. I thought of how proud Roy and Ed are of Aideen and how devastated they are going to be when they discover that Aideen has been harboring Dante all this time. *sigh* Obsessed much? :) Probably! LOL! My brain works in weird ways sometimes. I told you it was random as hell! :)
Koneko =^.^=

Please update soon

... Annoyingly predictable and confusing...

Noooooooooooooooooooooo, not Aideen. I love her, she can't be Dante!!!!!!

Hoh Shit! I had a dirty feeling it was Aideen, especially with her acting skills and whatnot. And you also mentioned the charcoal eyes and the green ones getting closer to her secret. i just didn't think she'd been in Aideen's body for that long, that was fucked up and brillant. You have me on the edge of my seat once again, and i totally look forward to more!! :D

WHAT!?!?!?! Red coat?! Black boots?! Mother was a skilled marksman?! AAAAAAAAHH!! NOMDEPLUME!! NOOOOOOO!!! I can't believe you did this to me!!!! *gasp* OMG!!! AIDEEN?!?!?! AAAAAAAAHH!! OMG! I knew that the big reveal of who Dante was would be unbelieveable - I just didn't think it would be THIS unbelieveable!! :P Oh! My head is reeling man! Oh Jesus. I am so stunned right now you would not believe it! :) I was just so sure that Rose would be it. DAMMIT!!! Congratulations my dear Nomdeplume! :) This chapter rocked! XD If I didn't love all the hell you put me thru I'd kill ya for tormenting me so!!! LOL!! Oh wow. I got so excited when I found this chapter that I could barely sit still long enough to read it! :D I was SO excited in fact that I had to stop like every other paragraph and take a deep breath to try and calm down - I was that anxious! :) It didn't help that I had people trying to talk to me while I was reading either dammit! GAH!!! STFU PEOPLE!!! Important shit happening over here!!! Leave me alone!!! grr!!! *deep breath* Ok. Sorry for ranting. I hate being interrupted in the middle of something important! Spazzy little thing aren't I? XD

OH! I probably should kill you for killing Wrath!! NOOOO!! Why, Nomdeplume, why? T_T Russell will be devastated! :( Speaking of Russell, you said he was buttoning up his uniform jacket when he came to help Fletcher. I didn't know, or maybe I conveniently forgot, that he was a military man. It just struck me as odd. I wanna know what his state issued name is now! :)

Dammit! It's taking forever to write this review! My hands won't stop shaking! :) Adrenaline rush is a killer! :) whew! fidgety.

The one I feel the most for right now is Ed. Not only is his daughter Dante *sobs uncontrollably* but Hohenheim has returned to further screw with Ed's head! Whoa! Hohenheim has come home to find his granddaughter is possessed by his former lover!! Crucial!! :D Ed now has to deal with Aideen's possession AND Hohenheim! That totally sucks! :) Poor Ed. The confrontation between Hohenheim and Dante will just be Hell on Earth (so to speak!) for him. ;_; Alas my beloved Roy is oblivious to the devastation that has befallen his family. *sobs*

Aideen is Dante. Man, that hurts my heart. :( At least Eckhart is dead. That's one good thing to come from all this. The other thing that made me smile was Ed's uniquely colorful language! :D "Stubborn little shit." ""Well, we have to wait until—" There was an explosion not far from them. "—Son of a bitch!—that thing isn’t firing directly at us."" "Oh, stop being a smug little bastard." ROFL! Three fine examples of Ed being Ed! Ed might have watched his language when the twins were little but I see that has fallen by the wayside! Love it, love it!! XD Nicholas did get to see his kinda sorta mom. That was nice even if it did make me a bit misty eyed. How will Riza, or even CAN Riza, go back thru the Gate?? whoa. Makes me nervous to think about what it will take to make that happen! :[ Ugh. Adrenaline rush is worn off and I'm crashing fast. *collapses*
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. *pouts* I don't care how "justified" Fletcher's comment about Roy was. I love my Roy and he can do no wrong! w00t! We Skirts are very loyal to our Fuhrer! LOL!! XD

NOOO not wrath!!!! i loved that couple!!! aww *tears* this is horrible first the other edward now him! *sigh* none the less it still is a great story and i cant wait to read more of it. u rock! tho im really sad about the end of this chapter

*eyes wide, hand covering gaping mouth* OH....MY....GOD!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAHH!!! Nomdeplume!!!! Are you trying to kill me?!?!?!? *gasps* Oh Wrath. *tears welling* Please be OK. Oh damn. *rubs cheeks* My jaw hurts from hanging open thru most of this chapter! :) I think I was holding my breath for most of it too so don't be surprised if this review makes no sense 'cause I think I have oxygen deprivation from not breathing! LOL!! I seriously doubt that anybody cares that Tucker is dead. Hell, I've been wanting that sonofabitch gone for ages! :D I will be ever so glad when Aideen finally grows up and stops being such a little pain in the ass. drama queen. How Ed kept from killing Phillip on the spot I will never know! :) How dare this little shit put his hands on Ed's baby girl!! *giggle* Nicholas isn't much better either! It was sweet how protective he was of his sister! :) Fletcher made another snide comment about Roy (OK, it was a thought but that's close enough for me! Hardass?!? Why you little...! *attacks Fletcher*) so I've put him on my temporarily non-redeemable list (which is subject to change at a moment's notice!) right next to his brother! mangy little bastard. grr!! (Ah the blind faith and devotion of a loyal guard dog that I have! Ain't it great? ROFL!) The only thing keeping him from going permanent is that he's found a way to find Dante. Oh but wait. WE DON'T NEED TO KNOW HOW TO DO THAT NOW DO WE SINCE SHE'S NOT HIDING ANYMORE AND DAMN NEAR KILLED WRATH!!!! *pants from all the shrieking. emotionally overloads and breaks down crying* What does "a very long cat-eye shift" mean? Never heard that one before. *gets riled up again* damnation and hellfire!! I KNEW that Godforsaken Eckhart would do something like that!! Oh hell! Riza's going thru the Gate!! Hohenheim too but I'm too spazzed about everything else going on to get too worked up over him right now. sorry bastard. Roy might get to see Riza again! Well, kinda again. It's not his Riza but close enough! :) I feel for Munich Roy. I really like him. Oh no! Something could go horribly wrong and Riza might die - again! *cries* Amestris Roy will be devastated!! Hell, both Roys will be! *sobs* I can't take it. Hang on! Hold up! Wait just one damn minute here! "The dramatics of the Mustang family were really growing to be too much." the hell?? I thought she liked giving "the brat and his family" hell. *rolls eyes* Ed's a grown man and she still calls him a brat. stupid cow. :P These dramatics wouldn't be that big of a problem with her unless she was directly involved in them meaning that...*eyes widen and gasps* oh shit! Is Rose Dante???? OMG! That would explain how she's been able to walk right past everybody unnoticed because she's been disguised as part of the inner circle all along! dammit! She's got that necklace and everything! Fat lot of good that damn thing did. *cries* THAT'S how she was able to be at parties and such and see everything going on! THAT'S how she's been able to walk around Central undetected! THAT'S why none of the troops searching for her have been able to find her! Nobody pays mousy little Rose any attention. DAMMIT! She's been right under their noses all along! It's the perfect hiding place! "With a clap of her hands and a scream of pain from the large man, she opened to Gate." DAMMIT! Just damn it all straight to Hell!! I think you really are trying to kill me leaving me with a cliffhanger like that! :) Whew! I'm spent after reading a chapter like that! :)
Update soon! Sorry this is all over the place. I get really random when I'm overwrought. :)
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. *giggle* I liked how Roy referred to Al's kids as a litter! I do that too!! How many does he have now anyway? What threw me about the petting charcoal thing was that "charcoal" wasn't capitalized making it a name and not just a noun. petting Charcoal = petting the family cat. petting charcoal = Uh, why would you pet a briquette? see? That capital "C" makes all the difference! :)

You killed wrath... Meh I never had any special fondness for him and it was a decent death. You can't say its aideen now because wraths reaction would most certainly have been different my money would be on fletcher but you had him have his shirt off so... I swear if it turns out to be aideen I will hunt you down for horrible writingness!

OH MY GOD HOW COULD YOU DO THAT! You are EVIL! Everlier than Dante! You killed Wrath with his own lover's body? Not only that, that means you killed Russel? You are soooooooo evil, you better hide! This better have a happy ending damnit after all you've put us, not to mention your poor chaarcters, through!

I am absolutly on the edge of my seat bitting my nails, waiting to find out who this pans out. I don't know if my poor little heart can take much more! *faints dramatically*