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so much love in here.
The depression that Aideen is suffering from that's sad. I hope she gets better soon. You gotta love Nicolas he is such a well meaning loving brat.
Al with gray hair that was priceless and Ed contemplating that will go gray.
I love the Russell,Wrath and Fletcher conversation. I told you Falman's is just not nice.kid is I so feel sorry for Raine she is such a great character .
Frank and Kain I just love Frank and Kain bits no matter what they are doing I just adore them so much They are so so so cute.

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Roy at Mase's grave that was just heartbreakingly sweet. Roy is just so loyal he never forget those important to him. He still went to Riza's grave . It is so great that he and Ed never forget her. She really was important to then and the know it. Great work as always.

Every friggin chapter is a cliffhanger! You delight in tourturing us don't you? That was another great chapter! I really can't wait to see where this story goes! God's 30 something Ed is so hot! I can't beleive you gave him a carrot top that is so hilarious! I just love love love how you have developed all the characters!

Aideen and Flecher forever!

You have no idea the joy you have just given me, as I came, by accident across World's Collide, my weekend is now set. It is rare to come across such a wonderfully well written piece about the dynamic duo and one of my favourite couples. Thank you.

ElegantPaws

"Don’t I have the right to be angry? This shit keeps happening, and I’m tired of it. I’m just so damned tired of it all." That one line says it all. The poor thing's endured a hell of a lot of shit in her young life and it's all finally taking its toll. I feel so bad for her. Thank goodness that Fletcher is there to knock down that wall of indifference she was building around herself and let the pain out! Yay Fletcher!! :) Oh, Ed with orange hair - funny! XD I needed that little bit of comedy with all this other crap going on! :)

I am completely freaked out now by the knowledge that the chimeras are right directly under the Mustang household!!! *shivers* I know it was mentioned once before but now I keep imagining these horrific beasts creeping slowly up to the surface and breaking into the house in the middle of the night and attacking everyone there!! *cowers under desk holding head in hands and whimpering* This nightmarish little scene won't leave me alone! I just know that this is what Dante is gonna do!! *cries* My imagination keeps taunting me with scenes of bloody broken bodies both human and chimera and screams the likes of which make the blood run cold! *whimpers again* Whew! It's all like something out of an old monster or slasher movie!! :) Anybody know how to corral a runaway imagination? :)

Hey, why hasn't anyone seen Dante leaving the laboratory (I guess) she set up under the mansion? Surely there are guard patrols around the area. One would think that someone would have seen her coming or going from there. *sigh* Damn it all to hell. They do say that the best place to hide something is in plain sight. :(

Nice to see Wrath and Russell are more of less back together! :) They lust each other too much to really leave one another! ;) It kinda scares me to think just how big Wrath really is. *giggles* Russell is a better person than me to take on that behemoth!! XD
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. See how nice I was not to rail against Hohenheim this time around? I can behave myself every once in a while! :) It's only because the bastard is able to show a little remorse and concern for Ed and Al. How sincere that remorse and concern is is another story. hmm. bastard. doubt. Guess I can't behave myself after all! ;)

Dude! You seriously had me freaked out there at the end! I thought for sure the chimeras were attacking the city again! whew! Why would somebody (I won't say it was Dante but she is a likely candidate) put a doll (I don't like to use the word doll since dolls are scary as hell but I can't think of anything else to call it) of Aideen in the tiger pit? whoa. Poor Aideen, she must be in total shock right now. I bet it barely registers with her that Fletcher is there for her. Thank goodness he IS there tho! She must feel like Ed did when he saw Edward's dead body. (Edward. *wibbles* What? I still feel the loss OK? He was a sweet guy. I lobve him. Not my fault I cherish and hold on to those I care about. *pouts like a two year old*) Oh man! Seeing myself like that would creep me out no end!!! @_@ eep!

"a Fullmetal tree with Mustang pears" *giggles* seriously? LOL! For some insane reason, I had to sing the line from the Twelve Days of Christmas, "And a partridge in a pear tree"!! XD I don't know why but I did! Oh man! Sugar buzz + headache medicine = one loopy Koneko!! wheee!! The botanist who named this one has quite the sense of humor! :D Note to self: Never go near this Seven Deadly Sins plant! yikes! Anything that's a combination of a Sundew, a Pitcher plant, a Venus Flytrap, and who knows what else can not be good! *shivers* I liked Gold Joker and Little Flame. cute names. How sweet of Fletcher to name this little gem after her! :) One might almost think he was flirting with her! ;) He's not I know. He's just tender-hearted that way.

Wrath and Russell's date is off to a wonderful start! ""You know, we’re on a date, so you could at least be pleasant." "You haven’t earned pleasant, yet, Russell." "Civil?" "We’ll see."" ouch! Wrath can hold a grudge about as good as me! :D ""I love you, you asshole. You knew what I meant." "Asshole?" Wrath asked. "Is that a new term of endearment?"" ouch again! snarky much? :) I'm not a fan of Russell but these two are fun to watch sniping at one another! It must be love for them to fight like this! :) Have fun not abstaining, Wrath! ;)

Bye Phillip. *kicks him (literally) to the curb* blecch. *grouses* Dreary teen angst getting in the way of the plot. yecch. :( Here Plot! Come on boy! *whistles* *Plot appears* Good boy! OK, sit. Now, see those teenagers? Sick 'em! Go get 'em boy! Don't let 'em overshadow you! *Plot, Dog of the Military, dutifully chases away the pesky teens.* LOL! I'm kidding, well, mostly anyway! XD Seriously tho, I am jonesin' for some action here - both romantic and dramatic! Throw a girl a bone over here! *Plot cuts his eyes at Koneko and smirks* What? *realization hits* Not THAT kind of bone, you pervert! Although...uh, never mind! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. Dante thinks she's humanity's greatest protector huh? I knew the bitch was crazy, just not THAT crazy! sheesh!

wow
so many emotions poor Philip. I don't like him but to have your heart crushed . Love the guys night out.
Wrath and Russell that was so them. Terribly bad but in a good way. If they could just take turns being the dominate one..........probably not.
Fletcher and the plants that was pure love. The tigers that was freaky scary and just ick. Loved Al with Ed that was adoriable.

I don't believe I've told you how much I appreciate this story, so here goes.

I LOVE IT!!! It's wonderful. It's deep, well developed, well written, involved and involving and angsty with smut. Thank you.

Ah Nicholas, such a little pain in the ass you are. And Aideen is quite the little ice queen. She always has been though, very practical and down to Earth.

I really loved that ending. Even when thery are making up, Russel and Wrath are fighting! Who was Elysia marrying? I think I missed that.

another great chapter!