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for Touka Kouka wa Uso Desu

by SatanXellis

person stupefiedNarutard
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, intriguing. I like your style of writing, very beautiful. I particularly like how you characterize Roy, seems much like him doesn't it?

I agree with not liking the ending of FMA. It was nice and all for Al to be with him and stuff, but what about poor Roy? Psshka, bulldonkey.

Anyways, even though it was particularly sad, I really enjoyed how you made Roy remember everything and also him looking through the pictures. It was great to imagine some of the things happening in the photos.

I really hated Maes dying. T^T Just wanted to say that.

I can't wait to see where you go with this, it's very cool so far, so please update when you can, okay? I'll be waiting.

Could you possibly e-mail me when you update? shitake_shroomz@yahoo.com

lovelovelovelove,
stupefiedNarutard
person Anon
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooooooo *squee* I'm hooked now, so when is the next chapter coming? And don't worry, seen all the anime, and movie, so no spoilers for me. And, YAY I'M THE FIRST REVIEWER!

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