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This was a great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!!

.... Huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh??? since when did Al start becoming a shrink? ah weeeeelll.... not bad.

Great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Plesae hurry with the next chapter!! :)

Great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! How is Al going to react when he finds out the story of Roy and Winrey getting together? Anyway please hurry with the next chapter!! :)

This sounds like an okay fic... but it just seems like you're bashing Ed and turning everyone against him, which I don't like at all. Al would never side the Colonel against his brother! It really don't get why everyone is suddenly trying to push a Roy/Winry relationship. Isn't there anyone who's on Ed's side? I really hope you will do something to make this fic less one-sided than it already is.

i have to say. you are the master of cliff-hangers, great story keep going. also let me know if u post anymore fma stories in the future

Go for it, Roy!!!

I have been following this for quite a while, and I have to say even though I am not a Roy-n-WInry-fan-together sort of thing...I have really enjoyed it. ^_^ But I have to say I really really feel for Edward. I get the feeling some auto mail is going to be broken and curses yelled. I have knpw idea what you are planning but I get the feeling Edward wasted his time trying to kiss her, she is too wrapped up with Mustang. Maybe Ed's too late...who knows ( am a EDWIn) fan....so naturally...yeah I'd want that to happen. But hey it's you story and a damn good one!
Keep up the good work!!
Littlechemisst

This is a great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)

I hope you update again soon. This was a really good chapter.