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I am glad to see that you kept the characters "in character". I found it funny that you characterized ed's style as "sneak in and blow shit up" thats totally what he does too. Great story.

I like this whole lot. It has been quite a while since I've seen the Ed-propositions-Roy-at-Roy's-place fic done well, and I've been in this fandom three years now. In particular, I love how very studious Ed is about the whole thing, and about how he plans to snatch Roy up using Roy's own tactics, then ultimately stays true to himself and does his own thing. Ed being smart is one of the sexiest things about this fic - that while he is new to sex and new to relationships, he's smart enough to take apart what Roy says and put things together and yeah. Excellent.