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First Chapter I'm assuming is Vegeta and Bulma? I always did think Bulma would have a thing for Goku if he ever did show his ore intellectual side. In fact, I think Bardock would swoon her with ease.
Second chapter is so sexy every time I read it, and I've read Moments several times through. Vegeta taking what he wanted.. mmm.. Kakarot relaxing him, Gokhan waking himself up with his own cry! it gets me every time
Third Chapter I don't really feel like the characters were too OOC really, and I like the serene ending, almost like it doesn't end at all..
Fourth chapter I was confused for a while on this one because only some fanfictions call F T Tora, and I mostly think of Tora as Bardock's friend, but once I got it it was a cute read
Fifth Chapter LOVED this chapter, very creative and moving. Well thought out and accomplished, I think the bolding and the wordage used was captivating to the reader and right for a person like Vegeta who is in denial about so many things.

Sixth Chapter I think you do a great job on Goku, a very relaxed and nonchalant character comes out in your writing of him.
Interesting point about Vegeta being even more pissed off he was beatien by an idiot. In fact, I think that's the best and most understandable reason for Vegeta to be so pissed off by him. Also, intersting last words about Vegeta needing to check his footing..? Is this a threat? What all is involved ;)

Oh my gosh...just read chapter two. So incredibly hot! I love the first chapter as well. You write well and these scenes are very captivating. i enjoy your imagination :) please share more!

You get in the characters' heads very well. You draw me in completely. Please write more!

Oh, chapter 11 is hot, hot, not! :)

Chapter 5...Fantastic!

The Idomu chapter was hot! I love the idea that Kakarot has to restrain himself from breaking his bonds although he knows it would be very easy to do so. It's even sexier than if he was somehow tied up in a way that he couldn't get free. It's like willing torture of the most lovely variety. Anyway, i'm not being very articulate...but that's all your fault! :-P

Nice collection of drabbles. I liked the humorous and introverted ones best.

Macha, I am putting this here so you'll see it ... I can't see your email either, so this is the only way I can contact you. I will temporarily put my email address in the comments part of my profile. (trembles in fear, wondering what you want to say ...)

I just want you to know that I've enjoyed these writings very much. I really like the one where Bejita and Chichi screech at each other but I have to say that I just LOVE the chapter called Regrets. Deliciously angsty and tragic. So...there you have it.