rate_review Reviews

Good stuff. This may seem inappropriate for a review for a different story, but I was just reading Anticipation and thought a story based on Bulma talking about hers and Vegeta's open relationship would be interesting.

Chichi and Vegeta are always fun to bounce off each other. Chichi is both brave and foolhardy, but I can see her deliberately hiding Goku from him. And I don't think Vegeta was too OOC - although maybe a little more patient than usual. This is my favorite so far. :D

Hehe - Vegeta has the hots for Kakarott (who wouldn't). Interesting tentacle porn - nice twist on the usual stuff every opening :P. And Gohan is fantasizing about it! He's such a little perv. :D

:0 Ooo...I am so glad I was just browsing the site and happened upon this story. Well...wow. I believe I will be liking this story very much. :D I love how open-ended they are, making you try to figure out who the main character of each chapter is. Very lovely writing. It has a very flowing feel to it and it has a very interesting concept. Awesome stuff!