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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. You have a wonderful writing style and your descriptive skills are amazing. You really suck the reader in. It was captivating and I loved the action sequence in the Prologue. Very well-written. Can't wait for the next chapter. You've done a wonderful job capturing the characters and although they seem a bit OOC, this is am AU so it's not too bad. Kai seems a bit sly and...arrogant in the not so 'I can do things better than you' way, which is how he is portrayed in the anime/manga and more in the 'I'm better than you and because of this I will be an ass' way. However, he's very eloquent and Tala is just the right amount of pissy. xDD
Really, a very well-written story. I really love it.
Really, a very well-written story. I really love it.
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue this!! it's really fun to read, and I really want to know what's going to happend.
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor Tala...having to put up with Kai like that...update the next chappie soon!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I. Love. It. I love it, I love it, I love it. I cannot wait for more. The detail and tingling atmosphere created from just a few minutes of the story just thrilled me. It's captivating and the dialog that comes with Kai is just... HART! <3
P.S. Although, some words seemed a bit redundant if I may add. (I think it was the word 'dark' specifically.)
P.S. Although, some words seemed a bit redundant if I may add. (I think it was the word 'dark' specifically.)
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not much more to say other than keep updating.. :D
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I. Love. It. Wow, just wow. For a moment there, I had totally forgotten the characters were of BeyBlade. I just loved Kai's character, it was absolutely... exhilarating, devious and wonderful (Although I should be despising his character because of what he was plotting to have done to Tala at the end of... chap. 1? xD I loved it. The moment Bryan spoke about fertility given to male and female Faes alike. xD I laughed so hard). Although his character really does remind me of someone else, but that's beside the point.
The relationship, or more like- conversations between him and Bryan really got me. xD I couldn't help but love them to death. The prologue actually, really left me yearning for more. It was, unpredictable, as I saw it. There were a million other possibilities that swarmed my mind and I did not even think of that one in particular. I can't wait to see what happens next. ^^ I'll definitely stay tuned. <3
The relationship, or more like- conversations between him and Bryan really got me. xD I couldn't help but love them to death. The prologue actually, really left me yearning for more. It was, unpredictable, as I saw it. There were a million other possibilities that swarmed my mind and I did not even think of that one in particular. I can't wait to see what happens next. ^^ I'll definitely stay tuned. <3
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
This fic is good.
When is the next chapter coming?
This fic is good.
When is the next chapter coming?
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THE CHAPTER ENDING WAS SPECIAL XD. INCLUDE SOME GREAT LEMON IN THE NEXT CHAP.XD HAHAHA
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*big smile* no other words than: i love it!
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think this will be a very goos fic. update asap ^^