rate_review Reviews

Oh now this is a VERY interesting story! My, my I really love how this is written, it flows well from one part to another without confusing the reader. I am eagerly awaiting more of this story. :)

~Alisha

it's a good story. What caught my eye about it first was the alternative pairing, and I immediately didn't care for the ice cream and insulting Sally part. But, surprisingly, I got pulled into the characters and the 'got caught with love at work' story.

You have a good way of writing that is bried and yet somehow descriptive. Keep that with you always.

I like Wufei's attitude and your style, otherwise the plot/premise doesn't do much for me. Conclusively, it's damn good reading.

Oh I loved this, where is it going? When are you going to update?

the story is great. The death of a loved one, especially so close, is hard to bare. Grieve and morn, but also remember the good times because if not, those left behind become a shell, and may never accomplish what they are born to do. Remember that no matter what there are people who are proud of you and that he loved you. If nothing else, remember that.