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for Can't Take My Eyes off of You

by DetoxAngel

schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, when are you updating?!
person Saiyajinprincess
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ouuuhhh *-*
i really hope...pray...errh.beg?! ^^ that you´ll update this great story, soon! :)
first of all, i wanna say that i think, you ´re an very emotional auther
and what i do like the most is, that you always write your stories, in the "i"- pov.
i donno why, but i really like that! 0^^0
you really made me feel with goku and gohan.
it hurts to read that goku became so sad and
even desperate because of gohan.
man, i slaped my head and stared at my screen for a minute or so, when
gohan said to his dad, that he will visit that school programme in the afternoon...
and than gokus reaction...
what i mean is that you really described it in a way, that makes one
almost cry.
and it was even more heart attacking, that gohan tried so badly, to
hide and well..."kill"?- his fellings in that very, very VERY painful way. both in pain.
both desperate and so hurt. g.o.d.s.

so. errh. where was i? ^3^
please keep on and please update soon,
if you find time and inspiration, to do it, neh???!!!! :)
i´m looking forward it!


person Naurto_lovr (to-lazy-to-log-in)
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Onna, where are u??!!! I e-mailed u days ago. Planning on reply back or are you by chance dead?
person CrimsonTide
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's so cool you're doing a chapter fic :) This story is great! Poor Goku though; Gohan made him so sad :(

I can't wait to see how this develops, so I hope you update soon! Again, great job so far!
person shevien
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AN UPDATE!!YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY (no more alcohol before 5)
fight Gohan! No stupid woman is going to keep Goku from you, mother or no. And Goku, you better not do anything out of pitty!!
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(That thing cut off part of my review! >_<)

Well, at least it was fluffness between characters. You better update soon you evil women!
person shevien
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A multi-chapterd fic!
Well, this is a nice (and more than welcomed!) surprise.
Brilliant start. Can hardly wait for an update.
person pun_xy
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. You always did the best Son-cests ^^
I'll be glad to check in on this one once in a while (translation: update!)
person Guice
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was nicely written and i enjoyed it. The pairing is a little different for me but I'll cope with it. I truly can't wait until the next chapter.

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