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wow this is amazing, i cannot wait for more :D:D, i'm glad all the saiyajin except brolli are back :D

I just read you fic...awesome! I really hope you continue writting, I would love to see what happens to the pack and poor Goku. Please write more!

That's quite a good story you have here, please keep going.

I must say, one of the things that I absolutely love in your characterizations (besides everything) is your Vegeta-hating/Goku-protecting Gohan. When I read the line: “How about we just kill him? He'll get to keep his tail and it'll work, no doubt.”, I just about rolled on the floor laughing. Don't get me wrong, I love Vegeta, but I also get an odd pleasure out of Gohan hating his guts. And just a suggestion if you ever feel like it, I'd love to see Gohan flip out like he used to when he was little with his supposed hidden powers and beat the snot of someone in the act of protecting daddy, just an idea. But anyhow, I absolutely love the addition of Raditz in this fic, Raditz is my secret love and I like him as Goku's brother (yes, I live in a world were he gets wished back for whatever reason and they disneyly make up and make best buddies).

Anyways, awesome fic as always, not to add to the broken record of comments that you no doubt already have, but please update soon! Your fics are like cocaine, and I suffer when you don't update. I know I don't really comment, but I have been following your writing for a bit and I is addicted.

That was a rollercoaster of emotions...

I was in turmoil whilst Vegeta was made out to be the ultimate bad guy =(
I mean I know he's no angel....((well, not in the eyes of anyone who isn't a fangirl))
But man, CT, that was heartbreaking ='(

Stoopid Buroli >=(
Glad he's dead.

And I always knew there was something about Raditz ^_^
Bless 'em.

Get well soon Kakarotto!
Another fantastic fic from CT =D

What that's IT??? You need to work on this after you get done with In Your Dreams, I need more Raditz! I love the whole pack thing, ::blushes:: Course this story is much tamer then Redkatt's Monkey Moon series ...less incestious too.

Aww poor B-kun died again... He does make a good villian... Oh well Goten and Trunks can accidently resurect him later to cause more trouble...

Raditz and Turlus need to get together... and Nappa... well we'll think of something, poor guy...

Poor Ku-chan needs some major TLC

Nikikeya: I'd pet him but I'm afraid Isan would bite my hand off... ^^;

Vejita: Damn straight brat, hands off! Go bug Gohan!

Nikikeya: ::Purr:: Gladly... ::walks off... zips back and pets Goku's hair then runs out screaming before Vejita can kill her::

Vejita: I hate her... =__=;

Goku: ::laughs:: ::snuggle:: -^-^-

I was pretty excited to finish this story but once I got to chapter eight, I had to stop. I'm not sure I can stomach another rape scene. There are certain things I can't read too well and rape is one of them, especially heavy violent rape.

Especially when Goku's the one being raped! Oh I just adore his character too much to sit and read about such awful things happening to him *bawls in a corner, sucking on my thumb but then realizing I have to do something*

*stands up dramatically* Don't worry, I'm coming to save you! *bursts in out of no where, picks up Goku and flies away, leaving behind a very enraged and confused Broli*

*we now spend our days in Hawaii getting tans and back rubs and free ice cream sundaes every hour*

Yay happy ending, even if I had to make it up to spare myself the nightmares that probably would've come if I had read this.

I just want you to know that this is still a very good story and you did a very good job writing it. Many of the scenes were just superb in description and emotion, but sometimes a reader just has to stop when they know they're way out of their comfort zone. It's nothing against you or this story. I hope you understand.

Love always,

Tabz.

Goku kind of surprised me in this chapter. I always figured he was real big on second chances and liked to befriend anyone who showed ANY sign of being a nicer, softer person. (Vegeta? Piccolo? Even Yamcha and Tien, as they got off to a bad start when they first met Goku XD) But, ah, well things change.

Broli balancing a ball on his nose is an hilarious image to say the least. And the fact that Goku wanted to see it was even funnier.

Vegeta's idea was interesting but I think it was a stupid move. I sense some real bad shit about to happen!

Now I can read a chapter without any interruptions. I was going to spend that time writing but bah! I'd much rather read right now ^^ This chapter (chapter four) broke my heart. Poor Goku. Vegeta is such a heartless bastard and I would wring his neck if I could. What's it going to take to get him to calm the fuck down? Jeez. Cut off his tail or something. If the won't do it then I will *grabs scissors and marches over there*

Though, as much as I do not like Vegeta right now, I do hope they can repair their damaged relationship. It's too awful when love is completely destroyed, especially by something as stupid as SOMEONE'S huge ego.

Anyway, loved the chapter! Sorry I'm reading it so slow, but between shelling out like three chapters a day, trying to do my homework and other life things, sadly I cannot just read as much as I like. If I didn't have insomnia, I probably wouldn't be able to write as much as I do. :D

Finally! I can sit down and read the next chapter of this story. This chapter had me feeling so many different emotions! Anger, shock, hate, sadness, sympathy and more anger. Vegeta...what the hell? No, seriously...what. the. hell? First he abuses Goku, then he locks him up, and then he RAPES him? I've never read a fic that makes me hate Vegeta more than I did in the actual show. Gurrr.

At least Gohan and Piccolo saved the day. I really hope they beat the crap out of Vegeta...though it's probably best they didn't try. I mean, he is so much stronger than them *at least Piccolo at any rate*. I hope Bulma and the others can protect Goku from that creep and I wouldn't blame him ONE bit if he never went back to that jerk.

But somehow I don't see Vegeta taking this lying down. No, I see him throwing a tantrum or something. This will not be good. UGH. Why do you have to write stories that get me so emotionally involved? Darn you. Darn you!!