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Screw sleeping, me want to read more! This chapter had all kinds things going on, from Vegeta showing up, to him attacking Goku, to Goku getting the best of him. However, though I haven't seen the series in a LONG time, didn't it mention in the Saiyan saga that Vegeta was immune to attacks on his tail? Or is it because it's a new tail? Maybe I missed something in the story.

I felt really proud of Goku when he stood up for himself. Don't let that bastard do bad things to you Goku! Now I'm really interested to see what happens next :D

This story looks promising! But what the flip is wrong with Vegeta? I can't believe he'd do something like that. Poor Goku. He really shoulda got outta there when he had the chance. It's sad to know that people often stay in their abusive homes because they really have no where else to go or they're just too afraid. I like the idea of the story but its making me a bit tense. Abuse...I cannot read very well. It has to be approached very delicately for me to be able to stand it. Too many people are insensitive when it comes to such scenes. Knowing you, though, I bet you write it with much sensitivity.

Anyway, looking forward to reading this fic! Oh yeah, and I added you to my recommended reading :D

Oh my god! NOOOOOOO T_T

I was in the middle of making a story like this one >.<

*starts crying in a dark corner*

Now I have to make a new one, Im so sorry I didn't know someone else had made a dbz story like mine.

You reviewed it, it's called a new life, I just came here to thank you for giving me some tips and found out your story plot is just like mine >_<

But yeah I guess I'll have to make a new one, but thanks for the tips and review n_n

to be honest, I don't like it. I just can not imagine Goku as a victim. he is full of skill and will in the battle. He is kind to the weak doesn't mean he is weak. he is the man who show the true color when only needed. He never show off his power doesn't mean he doesn't have it.

sorry I only read 3 chapters and that was my thoughts.

-DROOL- I can only dream of what u will write next.

yah bath time.

^-^ yay
J-chan

Ahhh that was so sweet.
Don't think I'll stop worrying though until they burn Buroli.

please update soon, its been driving me crazy that you havent yet, it really pulled me in and im itching for it to finish.

okay i need to know is this in any way cornected to try againe you also have been writhing. but good story.
laica