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don't scare us readers like that! yay for brolli being deaded ^_^

I'm glad the bastard Buroli is finally dead. Now what, where do we go from here??

Yeah you almost had me.....good come back.

Phew, thank god they got Broly in the end, I thought Goku was a gonner! Can't wait to see how Vegeta makes it up to him. Please update soon.

asklaskldfjasklfjaklj Holy shit, Firefly! I seriously thought you were killing Goku off and I was about to review this with nothing but screams of agony!

:D Alas, you would never kill our beloved Goku!

This chapter was so strong, emotionally. I mean, the whole Broly not being dead thing scared me to death! O: I was seriously reading this with my nose practically touching the screen, thinking, "Ohnoohnoooohhnoooo!"

You're such a fantastic writer! You write the characters perfectly. PERFECTLY. I mean, I even liked Vegeta's crying scene--and I usually hate those kinds of scenes because people make him act so..not Vegetaish! BUT YOU DID! I love this story so much! Its my favorite. No lie.

Oh! And definitely expect to see more doodles in my DA gallery soon.

I love you. Update soon, please! n.n

That was..hot. -:: Cough. ::- I mean, it was really cruel and horrible for Goku [POOR BABY.] but..but the whole lemon itself was really good. >>;

I really liked how Goku was trying to imagine Buroli was Vegeta. XD He's a good actor, I must admit. =/ He did very well at acting seductive when he really wanted to gag.

I seriously cringed every time Buroli gave out a command to Goku. The whole description of the blow job, and how it hurt Goku's jaw and gagged him! D: It made my throat sore.

And then when Buroli wanted to enter Goku, I totally whimpered aloud for him. 3:

BUT GOKU WON! :D He killed Buroli! It wasn't all for nothing! ..I hope he'll be okay! D:!

Next chapter! Please oh please ohpleaseohpleaseohplease! X3 I want to see Vegeta's reaction!

Damn, that was hot and dirty! The perfect thing to read to lift my mood before bed. Weird, I know, but nothing picks up my spirits like a really well written and intriguing story. Which is what this undoubtedly is. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Ha! I KNEW Goku was luring him. Must've picked up some acting skills from his brother after all. Then again, he's always proved a fast learner. And yeah... people are jerks. Man, I get some HORRIBLE road rage even if it's just a 10 minute drive...

I loved it! Keep up the good work and I hope Goku does slash Brolly's throat!

great story so far lets hope that the action is just getting warmed up. also i theink goku's just acting so he can gain brouli's trust and get to lower his guard so that when he strikes it will be beautiful. also r the sayians still on another planet or are they coming beck to earth.