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great chapter!!! i love this fic, plus--u kno, broli and goku don't seem that bath together lol--i still like goku/vegeta but u kno...its ok to keep an open mind lol but yeah great to see this fic again--peace!!

My gosh, Firefly! As if I haven't said it enough - I LOVE YOU! Not only is this story filled with delicious VegeGoku action, but BuroGoku as well! -:: Tackles you and smothers you in love. ::- :D :D :D :D

I love how Buroli handles Goku. It's so ..baaad....but in a good way. XD If that made any sense at all. AND YES. Angry Vegeta! I don't really like it when people make Vegeta...sad..>>; and sobby...when Goku goes with Buroli. No, no, no. If someone takes Goku away, Vegeta gets MAD and kicks ass! Which he seems more than ready to do in this last scene.

My favorite part of the bath scene was when Vegeta told Goku not to say fuck anymore. Haha, he's right, words like that shouldn't be coming out of Goku - but after all that Goku's been though..>>; can't blame him for talking dirty.

UPDATE SOON! Super soon! Reaaallllyyy ssuupppeeerrr ssoooooonn. ... =3 Please.

Yes, you're finally continuing this story!!! I actually kinda like Broli. Sometimes I wonder just what is father did to him to make him that psychotic. I mean, no one is born evil, they just get that way after a while.

Thank you for updating! Cannot wait for the next enthralling chapter!

this is good, but i hope the issue is resolved soon.

as for brolli: kill the bastard! very painfully and very slowly.

he's truly evil.

not done i want to c what happens w/ goku,vegeta and broli. continue writing more i'm interested.

Please update soon. i love to see this story finished during summer break! Brolly is such a cool character now.

In chapter 7 I would love to see Brolly use a lot of his force in power to make everybody submit to him and I want a rape scene the kind that would of happened in chapter 5 in the woods.

I really hope you update this one! I LOVE it...fantastic plot...just...god wow. WOW. The story is amazing thus far and I screamed when I found out that chapter six isn't the end >< WAH! Please update it! I love your writing, absolutely amazing! Plus the pairing is just...wow XD

write more very interesting chapter u had me hooked the first chapter. very good not a very easy thing to do by the way i'm very picky when it comes to reading bot neways keep going.