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You know, now that my hentai mind has had time to think about it, I wouldn't mind seeing some BrollixVegeta action. Maybe even all three. Now that would be HOT! Another thing, just how old are Trunks and Goten? Will Videl show ever show up? Will you be putting SS4 in the story? Anyway, hoping the next update comes soon!!

bwoah. :) broly . i knew it! i never liked broly. no matter if he is able to speak or not. ( i prefere not, though *g* ) i really hope, that goku or vegeta , or both, will stop him soon. even if i was thrilled by the fact that you let vegeta wish the pack back. including even broly i have to confess. :) oh and it was a quite clever explanation you´d given geta to do so! explanations like that are always very helpful. at least for me, they´re. i really appreciated it, if someone cares about such things. it´s just nice and yah, as i said, helpful.^^ it forms everything what already had happened and what will happen next, in my opinion.
this story is quite interesting written so far and also surprising in a way, after i´ve read already other stories from you. it seems that you´re very flexible and also experimentically / creative. i think thats excactly the reason why i already like your ff´s so much. and i do a lot! sooo, i hope you´ll update `Possessions` soon, if you find time and sense to do so. please, keep on!
baibai. :D

I forgot to give my email address when I told you to contact me. Ooops, I'm such a scatter brain at times. Anyway, my email is ultistarmon@hotmail.com ! Drop me a note if you need any help.

How about you make Raditz and Turles useful? They always struck me as a schemers, but they lose their tempers too much. With Goku there to calm everybody down they could think up all sorts of things. When will we see Bulma and the rest? Also, you never explained how Goku separated from Chichi and got with Vegeta. Think of what nasty inventions Bulma could come up with to bring Brolli under control. A new and improved version of that thing Paragus used. While I'm thinking about it, why couldn't Paragus come back to life? Was it because, he didn't die on Earth like the others? Flashbacks aren't a bad thing, you just have to do them right. I wouldn't mind seeing some BrollixGoku action, but BrollixVegeta is a different story. Brolli could focus just on Goku for now, after all Goku is the one he really wanted. Combined the Z-warriors could possibly take Brolli down or better yet lets see Gogeta. Are you going to include that whole mental bond thing? If you do, you could use the fusion to straighten out the mess Brolli made when he marked them. There are tons of things you could do with this story. The most important thing is to do what you like and do it well. Anyway, I like it a lot and if you need more help with ideas send me an email. UPDATE ASAP!!!!

Listen here damnit. Continue this fic. (or else) Or at the very least upload chapter 13 to gotyaoi.com. I've been waiting forever and was excited to see this fic on aff.net, but you won't continue and I really hope you do. I know life is busy, but I sure hope you're working on it in your spare time. I really like it, please, please, PLEASE, continue.

Yes, we are horribly impatient aren't we?! We probably should be more considerate and understanding. However, you're just so good at writing that we just want more. Then again if you were a bad writer then we would bug you about that. Mmmmm, the age old problem of speed vs. quality. Do your best and be quick about it and we shall reward you with lots and lots of praise and thanks. So in light of that, great work and update soon. Your truly devoted fan.

You are GREAT! Do you know that? This is the Vegeta/Goku fic I've been waiting for. Thank you for putting so much time and effort into this fic, you deserve all the reviews you get (except the flames, if there are any). I'll get started on the next chapter now, so I'll be going, but I just really wanted to say, you're a great writer.

WHY?!!!! I'm here drooling because this fic is so good. AND THERE'S ONLY ONE CHAPTER?! ARGH!!! HURRY UP AND UPDATE, WE DON'T HAVE ALL DAY! YOU KNOW IT'S GOOD, SO WHY DON'T YOU SHARE WITH THE REST OF US?! COME ON, UPDATE, SOON!!!!!!!!

I've read this somewhere else, but I can't remember exactly where. I know the website had a black background and red font. It was also listed under the name Firefly. You had all the chapters up to just before the fight with Brolli starts. That was about 10 chapters I think. Anyway can't wait for more, I really LIKE this story. If you do find the other place this story is please let me know, 'cause you had some others on that site that I wanted to read again.