rate_review Reviews

:D I love your descriptions, as always. Everything you write it droolworthy. *promptly drools*

That was so so intensely wonderful... I've always loved how you write these two and this is a different take, a rewind to an earlier point in their knowing of each other. It is all so believable.

And of course, we can understand how Alfons could be so affected by Edward...



I want more of this. I know you're the one-shot queen, which I so respect because I haven't the willpower, but... I'd love to be there at the moment Edward crosses that line...

Nicely done! I would like to see what becomes of this, it begs continuation.

Read this on LiveJournal. Didn't realize you were also cryogenia. I liked this fic, particularly Alfons' confusion over his fascination with Ed, and all of the little details about Ed, including the insistence he'd go home and inevitably sleeping in the chair. Nice.

So I've had this up in a tab for a day or so and still can't figure out what I want to say. Well written, of course, sexy in its own way, and angsty on Alfons' end. I can't help but feel that Ed might want more too, but doesn't know how to say it, other than as thank you. Uncertainty always runs rampant between these two, and at the risk of sounding girly, they don't talk enough.