schedule
March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your story was ok but your spelling and pronounciation need tremendous help. Spell check would help with the spelling.
schedule
May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if you need a beta email me ...
other than that this is a great story
other than that this is a great story
schedule
April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
apart from the grammer errors, i loved it!
cute and hot^_^
cute and hot^_^
schedule
March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, that was alright. Not great, because I couldn't really enjoy it because of all the grammatical errors. But, you have some talent, and I suggest you find a beta reader so that talent will show out more. This fic was kind of cute but it wouldn't have killed you to add paragraphs and seperate the dictations. Anyway, it was good over all, all you have to do is fic the spelling errors and you're good to go!