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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww =(
That's so sad!!!!!!
I really do love the way you write, Tyrana.
I laughed when you said you dont have as good a grip on the english language as you'd like- you have a better grip than me, and English is the only language I know!!!
Fantastic story...will there be more?

I am amazed at how beautifully you write. Your style is flawless and unique and you give the characters a depth and complexity that makes them appear so real, so alive. It is a rather rare thing to find such quality in the fanfiction world so please do not abandon this magnificent work of art. Thanks for sharing your amazing talent.

hey ^.~ *HUG*
that was great! *-*

but...
gohan...
no. *cries* >.<

i get a little bit worried about vegeta either,
as goku had enjoyed the sight of his hands around the princes throut.
(one never know ^^ )
but you´ve done a wonderful and great job with this chapter , as always!!! ^^
i really like the passion you lay in this story. and
you described especially goku very well again. you know i really admire
the way you characterise him.
what i mean is, that you never stay at the sureface, you let me see
inside his heart by describing him the way you did.
i like it when i can take a deeper look in a charakter.
heck no. i love it! :) felling the pain, felling the desperation and
everything...´just love it! d^^b
soo, please keep on, cant wait for the next chapter! *HUG*

PS: umm.just to inform you.i think that you´ve already seen that i am currently not at deviantart. so i cant do club challenges, writing comments and such things. i had been suspendend ^^°°
/ ha! oh joy/ but i dont really care much, though. ^^ no big deal. not at all. :) actually i only had have a little..."conversation"... with a "nice" girlie, with high level morals and an obviously serious head-damage, about my pictures. xD she reported my pictures to the DA Admins. heck, i really didnt believe, that they really would delete them. still donno why they´ve done it exactly. or maybe THATS the reason, why i had been suspended at all. that i am an intentionally pervert, imean. who knows. *giggle* ^.~ but well. the pictures werent hurting anybody or something and i had have chosen the mature contend... ~.~ ngaah,whatever! ^.~ as i´ve said, i dont know really when i´ll be back thats all what i wanted to say. but we´ll see us around, right? ^3^ mail, here, doesnt matter when and where i´m positive, we´ll. :) *hug* sooooo, hun. to cut off my own babbling about not really important things, let me end with this: please keep on writing!!! i just love the passion inside your stories and i am just enyoing to read them!!! i am looking for the next chapter!!! Please update soon, i f you´ll find the time!

take care! *hug* see ya! ^3^

wow ths story is very emotional

wow the end of this was intense! very very well done!

Wow... This is quite different. I'm so glad you didn't throw a full lemon in at the end of this chapter. That would have been a little odd considering the situation, but you stayed true to the emotions one would feel at a time like that and everything stayed believable. Bravo!

There's one thing that's bothering me though. A few times you used the term 'spitted'. I'm not sure that's a word ^.^; I believe you meant to say 'spat'. There were also a few sentences in there that didn't make sense with the way you worded them, but it wasn't a big deal.

Otherwise, you did a wonderful job! It's clear you put a lot of time and effort into this story and I'm itching for more! Your skills are top notch!