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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why don't they ask the kai's for another set of earrings and become whole again?
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, still as spiraling and out of control as the first two chapters, and I still love it! :)
Glad to see you are keeping up with this, and I hope this story has a destination...somewhere it is going, because I'd hate to see them like this forever.
Hmmmm, I do wonder what would happen if they performed the fusion dance...not a permenant fix, and it could possibly make things worse. *shrugs*
Glad to see you are keeping up with this, and I hope this story has a destination...somewhere it is going, because I'd hate to see them like this forever.
Hmmmm, I do wonder what would happen if they performed the fusion dance...not a permenant fix, and it could possibly make things worse. *shrugs*
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm, angsty and wonderful!
I really liked the flashes back to Radditz and Nappa trying to defend/protect Bejita. Goku's delerium was well-done, also.
I really liked the flashes back to Radditz and Nappa trying to defend/protect Bejita. Goku's delerium was well-done, also.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...you are an amazing writer...and this is an amazing story! Will there be more. I hope so!
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I always wondered how someone might look at something like this.
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really good!!!!
I need more please :)
I need more please :)
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I hope there's more of this soon!