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by italynbutterfly

person radcat
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At this moment I vote Riza with Havoc. Roy Roy Roy. Good thing for Roy that Ed was there otherwise he may have done something he regretted more or Riza would have eventually shot him or Havoc would have got involved. Men with tempers do not make good significant others. Poor Riza. Besides if Roy wanted or cared for Riza he should have done something much earlier. Something involving caring and love. Snooze you lose.
person wishful
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please make it a Havoc x Riza story! I mean, Havoc is being so much more sweet and loving here, and it is sooo hard for we crack pairing fans to find such gold... If you must, you can make it a threeway pairing, but seriously, Havoc x Riza FOREVER!
person radcat
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Riza being with Havoc. No wonder Roy never has a second date...most men are like that. It is a wonder women put up with some of them. Hope Ed learns from this...if he can figure it out...since he never seems to have hit puberty. Please update soon.
PS. What does Roy think when he never let her know how he felt especially since he is always dating a slew of women. . She has a life to lead. Poor Roy...does not have a clue. Good story.
person sjs
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the triangle you've got going on. Everyone seems to be in character though Alphonse seemed to disappear in the last chapter.
person Mumi
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, no flaws to point out. Love it! <3
person FaBzZ
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shame on Roy, not giving Riza a good performance on there first time together. I know its not like he knew but still.Anyways I still liked it and can't wait for the next chapter. LaTeRzZ
person Wishful
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I've always been a big Riza-Havoc fan (and there's so little good Riza-Havoc fics out there, but the ones there are are so good they make my toes curl). Pretty please tell me Riza and Havoc have a future in this fic, even if it is with Roy in the game as well? Please? Come on, blonde sniper subordinate lurv is the best! And he's totally jealous, and Riza even thought how he's better in bed, and he cares, and he's only lying to himself about not loving her, please please please?

Update soon!
person FaBzZ
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loveing this fic can't wait to see more updates.If you can do me a favor and email me when you update again Please. LaTeRzZ
person Fucking Sex Crazy
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you're the most disgusting person ever to have lived. All who write about sex should die. You fucking dog. You ARE A PERVERT YOU SICKO YES YOU FUCKING SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO SICKO
person wild seven
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nifty chapter. I liked it! :) (:

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