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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So good! I love this story! You keep Bulma and Vegeta very much in character. Please update soon :)
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First Chapter:
woah. He's getting very very angry about that armor. He doesn't have much in this world, which is the opposite life a prince is supposed to lead, but what he does have is precious to him.
woah. He's getting very very angry about that armor. He doesn't have much in this world, which is the opposite life a prince is supposed to lead, but what he does have is precious to him.
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Teaching him to kiss was very unique, I had never seen that before. Great Story.
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm used to reviewing each chapter on ff.net so if you think I reviewed too much, I'm sorry. But very well written chapter, the last line was very nice.
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The shower scene was a nice touch. That was a different view on trunks and whatnot. Another well written chapter !!
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the part with Atomica was good. They both needed somebody. Bulma especially.
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet again, a great story! You are by far, one of my top favorite authors!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was best the fic i ever read ^_^ great job
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what I like about you. You write a one shot lemon then start filling in chapters and somehow end up with like a novel.