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December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi I loved your two chapters, hopefully soon follow if you go to security, I love the couples that make D and Ed are so cute, from time to time a change is good, good is so, thanks and kisses.
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it!! You gave lots of details in the first chapter. i personally like to read long chapters rather than a bunch of short ones so stick with the longer chapts. I can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work i'll be looking for the next update
- Courtney
- Courtney
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can I make a suggestion? I think you'll attract a lot more people to your fic if your summary was a little better. I know it's hard to summarize your whole story in one sentence, but yours isn't even grammatically correct. So far you have "ed get hurt while helping someone. he's rescued and goes on an adventure across space. better than the summary sounds i think."
People choose what story they're going to read based on someone's summary. Not a lot of people are going to read your story if they think you can't even capitalize the beginning of your sentences. The content is good and I really think you'll get a lot more hits if you go back and revise the summary.
Just a friendly suggestion~:)
People choose what story they're going to read based on someone's summary. Not a lot of people are going to read your story if they think you can't even capitalize the beginning of your sentences. The content is good and I really think you'll get a lot more hits if you go back and revise the summary.
Just a friendly suggestion~:)