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I think you have tip-toed over the line between genius and insanity.
Ares + Eris + Vegeta = BIG TROUBLE!!
But, all in all, a very good fic.

Wonderful to see you updating after so long. Can't say I'm any better *giggles it's been FOREVER since I even touched my own DBZ piece. I so need to get off my duff and update it, a good portion of the chappie is just sitting there screaming at me to be completed.

Definately an interesting choice in which dieties came to visit our Prince next. Hmmm, I do wonder what kind of trick or deal they'll attempt to pass over on Vegeta. Poor Bulma is going to be traumatized, I would be if I picked an eyeball outta my hair. *shivers*

Very sorry it took me so long to check back and read, I'll make it a point to look more often. They definately need to make an email alert or something for stories. Keep up the good work, my dear and I'll be waiting patiently to read the next installment when it comes.

Much Love,
~The SlowHand Muse~ aka ET

Welcome back, it can be such a pain in the ass not having internet connection. I feel yer pain... hope your muse hasn't abandoned you like me. Can't wait to see the newest chapter, but do take your time and make it good. *giggles*

Your most welcome for all the encouragement. *grins broadly* It's all well deserved, I'd hate to see such talent discouraged. I'm thoroughly enjoying the story and how it's unfolding, I really can't wait to see just who the balancing evil force is. And Vegeta can come save me anytime. *giggles* I've learned in my experience to take my time with my writing, if you force it sometimes it just comes out crap. And we all know how well crap goes over, mmkay. Friendly warning, try to break up your paragraphs make them shorter and easier to read, people sometimes find them intimidating when they're so long. I should know, I've been trying to keep that in mind with my own works. *slinks off to go watch Vegeta in the shower* Much love and keep em coming!!!

*applauds* Bravo, bravo. Your quickly finding your own writing style and it's absolutely stimulating. Write what you know and if ya don't know... research. -_^ The plot is getting very interesting, moving beyond the bounds of the original concepts I imagine. Just let the Muse flow. *grins broadly* I do believe Venus got a little more than she bargained for. Ooooohhh, I love the balancing of power concept, but I am so curious now as to who will appear as the darkness to the Prince's light. Gore, violence, smut, drama and a plotline WOOHOO. Can't wait to get the fully chappie. *grumbles to herself about her own slowness* Much love!

Hmmm, I could see Vegeta in skin tight leather or ripped jeans, nicely tailored shirts left unbuttoned to expose his chest. NO PINK SHIRTS DAMNIT TO HELL. *cackles with insane glee* I don't think I'm any help, I personally think he'd look good in just a rubber duckie. hehe *refrains from singing the Rubber Duckie song* Vegeta with full power in our world... wow that's gonna be a curious combination. "What do you mean tip?," Vegeta frowns, his dark eyes narrowing to slits. "Sure I'll give you a tip," he states plainly before blasting the waiter, "never fuck with a Saiyi'jin". Nice chappie, getting better and better, keep up the outstanding work. She would go as Deedlit LOL. And I must humbly apologize about not updating, I'll work on it as soon as possible and get that out for you and my other readers. Much love!!!

*blinks innocently* OMG... you didn't just make the proud Saiyi-jin Prince just BLUSH? Nice little teaser though, enjoy your anniversary.

Interesting start, I will be checking back frequently to see if you've updated. Can't wait to see what little tidbits your going to offer up to pacify the hungry masses. *egrins* I also wanted to thank you for your support on my own piece "If Only For A Moment" and return the love in spades. Keep up the good work. Hopefully I shall try to update my story for you as well, but we'll see with all my projects. I love Record of Loddoss War, it's one of my favorites specially Ashram and Pirotess. hehe

Interesting. I liked the movie Mannequin when it came out. Please keep going..