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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This fic makes me happy. The scene in the cave was my favorite. : )
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww I usually hate first person fics, but this was so sweet! I really loved it, you do a great Piccolo. I want more of these two!!
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is actually really cute- I like the cave+sogy clothes+goku's head part. cute. nicely done ^^
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. It touched me very deeply, the gradually build up of emotion in Piccolo's narrative. He's my favorite character, too, and the story just about him and Gohan and Goku is my favorite part of the whole series.
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really excellent. I dont think its rambly at all.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAA!!!!! It's such a beautiful story!!!!! PLEASE TELL ME YOU'RE NOT FINISHED!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE IT!!!!
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are rapidly becoming one of my favorite Piccolo writers. :) I love how Pic thinks and thinks, his thoughts just whirring him around, but his feelings remain something he either cannot acknowledge or doesn't understand. Great simple moments without an overload of drama or any resolution.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Oh man, you know, I wasn't even going to read this but I took a look and sure am glad I did. It's great. Lovely plot and all. I am just about speechless, luckily I can type. ;)
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You know, I wasn't even going to read this but I took a look anyway and sure am glad I did. It's great. I love Piccolo's introspective and the plot is lovely. Man, it actually left me speechless , luckily I can type ;)